AkshatSharma8857
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I finished the manhua what chap should I start
There are many stories here, which is the best official website
Why aren't you not translating the novel with correct English anymore
The story was ok, writing quality though there are mistakes it doesn't cause any confusion while reading. My issues are the inconsistencies, the MC says X but then does Y cause it adds more drama, or in one quick arc he destroys three 3* mages like they are paper, and then just a couple chapters later he struggles against one 3* and a 2* mage (because these 2 were the end of the arc boss supposedly he had to struggle). I am a few behind of current, but the story has turned into rabbit hole of side stories, and with the pacing side stories seem to never end (20 chapters for a single auction that is part of a side story that off loads one of the women for awhile). One of my other issues is how fights go, as others have said MC always struggles till he has one move left then pulls it out. However the fights are all Throw attack A see what happens, throw attack B, let enemy regroup, dodge or take a hit, then throw attack C. None of the fights exhibit any coordination with his team, or ability chain attacks. It is always Someone doing one ability everyone stands and waits to see if it works before doing anything else. As a team they have so many combinations they could use, but none of them are used. Author is hinting about a Tournament Arc that MC is gung ho about, but still keeps saying he wants to stay low key... All in all the story for me just lost it's hook for me to continue and it started at the Sect Arc and has just eroded.
All types of Tropes and cliches used in this , useless system and forced plot , and plot holes numerous , usual faceslapping if you are a veteran reader don't waste ur time
I wish I liked this more the writing quality and release stability is great. The main problem however is that I'm so tired of children mc. They take forever to grow and become interesting. This story just feels so slow and predictable. It' really cliche too, but there are a few things that make me say I wish I liked it. Like the master knight and seeing a bit of character growth.
The story itself is okay, the only thing that is holding it back is the grammar. it's like mtl hahahaha
I really loved the character Albrecht. He's so relatable. The grammar and flow are flawless. The cliffhangers are to die for. The author is terrific at monopolizing the feelings of the readers.Definitely worth a read!!!
This is a great read I find myself waiting spicifically for this book to release new chapters. Great story development, world building, charicter intersctions, etc.I highly recommend this to anyone who wants to pickup something new to read.
Overall, not a bad novel. There is a little bit of NTR but it's not excessive. Personally, it was too much for my tastes. Writing, characters, and setting are all quite good. Some decisions about the characters are very questionable.
If you like reading about an arrogant egoti idiot. then this is the book for you The author is a good author I didn’t see any grammatical errors or major problems with the story that make it unreadable. But the main character is so arrogant and stupid that I’m surprised that he’s not dead by chater 5 I will keep reading the book for now see if there’s any character growth maybe he becomes humble later on in the book.
