i have read the whole i initial chapters, and believe me when I say I couldn't stop reading it. It was a very interesting concept of story! The right mix of fiction and action in one book! it was amazing. Good job, Author!
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you
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As much as i like it, I really dislike the whole aspect of the mc being in a toddlers body for the majority of the story, its just a massive put off. I get the premise of it with him being a child of the empress and stuff, but i would of thoroughly enjoy it alot more he unlocked his memories of his past life when he got to a certain level of skill or power with magic. I have just never really enjoyed the whole genius baby thing, its a really over done concept with reincarnation novels.
But all in all, i did enjoy it and keep up the work king!!
now this interesting piece of novel,it's good and has a good writing quality ,the character design and the plot. Idk but some name in the novel is extremely familiar especially mc's hometown hehe
Nice start for a story. It gets intense every time ?. Especially, Daniel, he is shown as serious and broken at the same time. If you add more scenes about his last maybe it will give more inside about what made him like this. Anyhow, the story is amazing looking forward to reading more about it.
Writing Quality and Stability of Updates: 5/5 on both, Simply I couldn't ask for anything anything better as the author never fails to deliver us with one chapter every day. The author has a good command over English, certainly not a surprise considering he hails from a natively-english speaking countryStory Development: 5/5, I was a little skeptical at first due to the sypnosis, Kind of just came off as an another local waste rises up to be a phoenix with dragon queen. But glad to say that I was wrong, very wrong. The average aptitude of protagonist is barely ever mentioned in chapters and even if they are mentioned I don't remember any of them being in contempt which is quite a relief. The plot of this story is progressing at a gradual speed, not too fast not too slow, just how I and I imagine a lot of people would like it. Nothing cliche seems to come up yet which is good.Character design: This is I believe the greatest part about this novel, as every character, starting from the protagonist to the garbage picker has a certain depth of character and each of them seem to posses a rational mind( it pains me to think something so common such as this is rare to find in this CEO-novel filled website ). The protagonist has shown no signs of possessing a moral compass which to me is a plus point but I'd understand if that turns you off from this story. I'm pretty sure he'd only get colder and more sophisticated as he progresses. Would Background: I have nothing to say about this one as we only know about his sect till yet(not that I am complaining). But referring from how this novel never manages to disappoint me I am certain that the world background as it gets revealed won't be bad.
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I’m going to review this for you. This story is actually good. If one day it was to be a shounen, it would make a decent one, for this ill leave a good rating. Also, pretty good book for a single writer.
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