So far, is entertaining, too son to say more about the world building
Hey Vsauce, Micheal here. Our MC's journey is a coincidence. Or is it?
The story is fun to read. The writing quality is good, smooth and detailed. The Fl's personality is likable and the other characters too. good work.
it's one of the good webnovel i read (not completely ) and remeber the story line till now. it already translated 1300+ chapters..and this novel has 12k chapters.its good read.not common webnovel trash
Website : qidian china
Views : 1.48 million
Rating : 7.8(122)
Chapters : 1182
Status : completed
Word count : 2.60 million
author rank : lv5
I’m dying for updates here, yo. In fact, let’s just say I’m begging the translator for new chapters. YES, I’m on my knees for a story with a CAT as the MC but it’s worth it because it’s such a hilarious and interesting one. PLEASE put me out of my misery and update soon? I’d shower you with fairy dust if you would do so.
it was a hidden gem that i found while i was bored but it was worth it i expect more chapters from the author. Author please realese more i'll pump you out power stones and please add a cover it'll be more presentable y'know.
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: The constant multiple scene changes within a single chapter are confusing (speaking of POV's). I don't understand the world at all. I can see the intention and potential of the plot and characters, but also see a lack of depth and follow through on those.
Positive Feedback: Good character and story ideas. Also, Seems like you are keeping to the post rate you promised. Only spotted one grammar error.
Personal Feedback: Good ideas with a ad execution, my apologies, but I will not be continuing this novel. I hope you continue for those who enjoy your book, I just can't enjoy a book that seems like the author was just trying to rush all their ideas (not rush through the story...the story is actually quite slow... It just feels like the story making process was rushed)
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Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
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morning star here , haha nice book.
nothing more to say, didn't thought it would get this good
hey man I have read such a good story in a very long time
I hope you can publish more of it. And never stop.
It has such a great potential