well written cant wait to see more content thanks
The author clearly is just trying to get money with low quality writing.
Same as the other stupid novels....same background and same ****ty villains...I totally get a headache reading this type of novel...I mean if you are reader of many Chinese books u can understand what i mean..MC jumps into all the ****ty plots directly if he sees some random street brawl regarding alchemy and gets humiliated like.."Get lost boy we are discussing alchemy and not to drink milk" and MC will brawl with them about alchemy"authors main way of filler" and the people will prostrate before him asking his repentance for the wrong and to teach them alchemy.....same ****tttt everywhere..arhhhhhh
Is not the same novel, you all f up, also the dragon novel is super cliche we think our mc is in the "demon" camp but he is not really a demon more like 2 sides of a pvp game thats all.
An absolutely amazing start if this doesn’t get picked the editors should be fired. I’m looking forward to to future of this book! 11 chapters in and this one has the best start I’ve seen for a long time, possibly the best start ever.This is a top quality book and I highly recommend it.
Synopsis is wrong. He doesn’t have a F rank skill, but a B rank skill and it isn’t upgraded to SSR Rank. world background is similar to real life other than being awakened. Mc character design is garbage, at chapter 4 you might just cheer for the female lead. Ignore tag of high iq, more like entitled mc who already has a pretty decent talent but asks the system for a higher upgrade. The system is rather unnecessary in this novel as it should have been supplemented that everyone can see their own status in a game like screen. In fact, the mc asks system why he won’t get a higher upgrade, and while translation is terrible, the reason for that is because his body can’t handle it. The reason I say the mc doesn’t have a high IQ because upon exiting a mystic realm (dungeon training instance), he is asked by a man if the mc had gotten a skill drop. The mc replies he had and used it already. This is a huge red flag because now it just sets up the more enemies come because you had something rare trope, which will later invoke my boss’s boss or my brother’s master cliche to fill up the storyAlso the female lead tries to cheer up the mc saying that, “it is not the rank of the talent, but how you use and the effort you put in it”. MC ignores the female lead’s words thinking she’s insulting him. Translation definitely needs to be better as it takes away from the reading experience especially with an entitled mc who thinks that because he has a system and clones, he shouldn’t be working as hard.
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Its good and I like it personally.Sentencing and paragraphing could be better but this is still better than mtl.I read something like this some months ago, but didn't get picked cuz of webnovely reasons, so I hope this one get picked.
I think this story has a lot of potential and the writing quality keeps improving. The fight scenes are by far the best part of the book and well described. It’s almost as if you can see, what’s going on, in front of your inner eye.The story is a bit fast paced, but otherwise I don’t have anything to complain about. Keep up the good work.
Top novel. Original novel "The Sage of Einar". A very interesting and unusual piece about the adventures of Einar............................
IF YOU DON'T LIKE THIS. THEN CLEARLY SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH YOU AND YOU MAY NEED A DOCTOR AND PSYCHOLOGIST.ONE OF THE BEST NOVELS I HAVE READ THIS YEAR IF NOT THE BEST.
Football Singularity? More like slice of life drama Singularity.You know, be honest, this story is like 65% drama slice of life and 35% football, That too has been helped by 7-10 chapter of 1 match football, if 1 match football only 2-3 chapter it Will be 80% drama slice of life and 20% football. And your grammar need to improve my friend.And some things that don't make sense are, man, our MC has already grown up in his previous life and reincarnated. And in his previous life and the beginning of this life he was in a worse situation, namely human trafficking. And now he's so scared of just 1 person carrying a gun at school? Like come on, you ran away from a group of armed people at the beginning of the story without fear, and from past life experiences, has he never experienced something worse than that?