The vocabulary and grammar is worse than a primary schoolers, the synopsis alone has more than 30 grammatical errors.. how is it possible to read this..
I couldn't get past the first chapter without crying ? ?
Eu gosto de como o romance está indo tão longe. Não há muitos romances como esse, todos os outros são descartados e nunca terminados, então espero que você continue atualizando.Eu geralmente gosto de harém, mas este é um caso em que não me importo que seja um único par e com o amigo de infância dele. Eu só espero que não haja trapaça e desgosto mais tarde na linha
. . Thes is gret ............................ .............................................
Please provide more for us your supporters
Needs a rewrite... the grammar is so bad it's practically unreadable...
Another atg trashfic, same as the atg nurarihyon no mago ,same stupid trashfic, it's ok if he time travel but combining novel and anime is faking dumb
Grammar has flaws and the author should use grammarly or an editor, however the story itself makes up for it so I suppose it's an alright read.
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.This novel, Condemning the Heavens, is my current main novel. It is my third cultivation novel and I have been writing it for over a year. It follows a guy who just wishes to be a hero, but reality is cruel and life goes against him time and time again. He is forced to flee for his life and he gathers friends and companions alongside his journey.The story is about how there is no good or evil in the world, that everything depends on the view of each individual, and that you have to fight for your own happiness.I have written quite a few novels. On this site I have Blue Phoenix and Overthrowing Fate which both are complete and cultivation novels. Apart from them, I also have a female cultivation novel called Forsaken Immortals, which happens to be a fantasy romance, and a few other modern romance novels.If you have nothing to read, please give these novels a try, I hope you will enjoy them!
If you're used to HQ translations where translators do their research and try their best to convey the original intention of author...then you would be really disappointed. The translations quality is very poor. Blatant misuse of pinyin. Cultivation realms are not properly translated (most of times they are in pinyin and you won't understand what they mean). Even locations are wrongly translated (yeap wrongly as it's totally different meaning. See China Sea as an example. It should be Eastern Sea due to nature of plot but no research so...). Same goes for artifacts like Tianyuan mirror which can be easily translated but translator was too lazy. I could pinpoint hundreds of mistakes...sigh. Allover the fun is greatly reduced. As for plot: It's similar to MGA, PMG,etc... But it do gets better after 1K+ chapters when author reveals some interesting background info about the world and protagonist.
Finally a good novel, like, seriously wtf where they putting on trial a few were racist af some ***ist and the most annoying thing is the unrealistic characters, world building etc. And especially the annoying harem/romance sometimes even the cheat is bland like increase intelligence once and that is it. both the editor and translator seem to like it and have already translated a few novels so the chance it gets dropped is low.Here is a basic summary from what I've read so far I'll edit it if something new pops up. This is just the cheat and I've made sure there are no spoilersCheat: everyday he gets a point once he has enough points he can choose a simulation world and he can also use points to help him in that life (he stays in there until he dies) like talent, background, family, age, etc. After he dies everything he did is calculated and he gets a rating then gets points based on the rating (from what I've read it seems to follow F,E,D,C,B,A,S with + and - from lowest to highest) he can then use those to either spin a lottery to get one skills he accumulated in that life (basically he has the knowledge but not the training like for example knowing exactly how to use a great sword but your body is too weak and reflexes too slow so you can't use it with the lottery he gets the training as well though the skills are random) and after each try the points needed double (20,40,80 etc.) Or keep them to go a. A new world or b. The same but with better circumstances.Restrictions of cheat: (factual) there is a chance of dying if he chooses a relatively old age as his younger self could die (killed by beasts, raiders, traps, illness etc). Will add more if they pop upWorld building: not much has been seen but so far it has been goodStory: while a bit slow at first the plot is starting to developCharacter development: not much but so far so goodTranslation quality: a few mistakes here and there but very goodUpdate quality: Idk it isn't picked yet.
I vote because i dont want another romance webnovel thats it. And the picture looks nice. Lel. What i have nothing more to say