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there are many things which are not explained properly.... like how does others have information about catacombs and dungeons..... how does others know that he wants to become nature mage??? does everyone get extra stats when they lvl up??? if not then y do you have to lvl up??? he only got one additional stat for 5 lvls!!! I mean with his amazing luck and all if geting stats with SSS skill is sooo low then is it still SSS skil??? many discriptions are not clear.... her sister is unconscious/ in coma??? and he said they are in a hotel room!!! who is taking care of her??? what about her food for sooo many days???? lot of questions I hope Author answers
Overpowered MC with lack of wits and cruel , no rival , no love interest, no family, or even allies, just NPC subordinate. Bad story telling overly cautious MC that would slaughter everything because his lack of security and severe distrust. Not a wise leader, , just a cruel , dumb , demonic racist .
This is a great story of a man moving through a virtual reality video game and becoming the top player. Throughout the story he will develop various powers and that are not forgotten about. A skill that is used once will be used again. Most stories like this will forget about skills that were once used. However, even skills that are rarely mentioned will be brought up again from time to time to remind you of their existence. This shows us that the author is fully aware of his story and has an in depth understanding of what is important so that the readers will not forget small bits and pieces of the story. However, there are a few errors in translation but are easily fixed in your mind as you're reading. So I view these as very minor.
the story is good and the pacing is somewhat fast but i can see way too many similarities between overgeared and thisso i am hoping atleast in the upcoming chapters it won't be the same ?
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Zzzzzz heck no idea what's going on wid the story, it's boring and made me tablet which I was holding up face slapped me coz I fell asleep while reading
The first novel i read without old grandpa , reincarnation , system , op cultivation technique , op weapon , tournament , spacial ring/ bag , sect , harem hoarding mc , no bull**** infinite years secluded meditation , clone/avatarThis novel is really great it gives me fresh exp with right amount of comedy ,seriousness , drama and a very fitting iron lady to be the main female leadPlus the most important factor isI LOVE YOU LOULAN!!!!!!!!!!!
This was a terrific short read during the trial period, absolutely love the concept and world building whilst the characters are quite excellent as well. Hope this one makes it guys or we might be losing a gem
hmm... such a good novel.. but why!! why!! there's no new chapter!!! ???? the author.... I demand a 100 bonus chapter..
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after chapter 20 the translation issues and grammar issues get annoying.
