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Great story i like it?????????
It is a well balanced story with a good setting and reasonable developments. The abilities available and character backgrounds are also satisfying. I wish this gets selected. What are the editors doing.
A gripping story! The beginning gives a solid introduction to the status and environment of the protagonist, clearly depicting the current means of survival. I personally really enjoyed the little touch of mystery added to the first few chapters, with the identity of the protagonist being half shrouded in darkness. The writing flowed nicely and did not have any grammar errors.This is the type of novel that really makes you think. It effortlessly submerges you into the story, leaving you craving for the next chapter.All in all, it was quite an enjoyable read. Looking forward to future chapters ^^
Hello! shameless person here to tell you I have a book that's just starting out, it has 4 chapters and I need criteria and inspiration, please oh please, tell me my flaws
Having written over 100k+ words, I can tell you that this novel is kinda slow paced. You might feel like things are happening randomly at that point.The pace does go up a bit after around 50 chapters but it's kinda slow before that. Anyways, have fun reading!
This is very enjoyable! It takes original themes and changes them up so it's not the same as everything else! I totally recommend this story!
Its my first time create a novel so sorry if there was misspelled word , capital , bad grammar. Ill try to fix it if i spot it so do comment. I dont need subscribe since it was no youtube. but i really happy if you like and enjoy this. Oh and please let me rate my own novel. it will not gonna hurt you all right? :p
Update please ???? I need more been waiting patiently
Did the author drop the book?...............................................................................................................
This is one of the best stories I’ve found here... The characters are engaging, the storyline well developed, and beautifully written. I couldn’t stop reading until I finished everything posted and when I finished, I was utterly distraught because I really NEED to know what happens next & who the other maidens were... I just wish the author was still updating. Even if it was updated only once a month... I’d be estatic. Vyvyyan- you are a gifted & captivating storyteller and I truly hope you finish this story.
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