"Indeed I am indeed the death god, but like I said my name is a crow," she said in a really cutesy voice. Shinta couldn't believe what was happening before him when he said he swore to the death god; it was only a figure of speech to vent how angry he was.
*send*
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"My apoligies, I'm Alex's nanny but as far as I'm concern Alex is not here."
"Why is it so important to go to heaven. I mean surely it is an achievement to be proud of, but you will leave this world when you get there. You got something new, but lose something you have before. Are you that certain that the new things you will get are better than the old ones?"
I liked the plot but there is too much extra and unnecessary information.Furthermore it's power ranking is exceeding 100 and the translator has more than 2/3 of the chapters locked. I mean who the hell would read it........
This book has a good setting. You should try it.
I liked it for not having a system, the MC could have a type control the technology he can enter the "internet" with his mind understand the machines and a lot more
This is my favorite genre, and it's written quite well too. No matter how many novels we have with system dungeons and monsters, it would not be enough. Well done. Try it. you will like it.
I like where it is going. I think the MC is a more paranoid than he should be after the bots are given by system so at least it should be fine for letting them do things on there own. Anyway I like the way you write and how the story progress. A bit of erotic and a bit of plot makes all the story more interesting.........Keep it up........ Author you have my support and best wishes.
CREATIVE!!!The author has great creative and imaginative skills. All the thoughts about story are well portrayed in the novel. The character design and the emotions every character feels are well described. The background of every place is also vividly explained. The writing too is easy to read without much hassle.Keep Going!!!
Very nice story indeed, I had the urge to read the 10 chapters. I would say probably be more descriptive on the writing so I can feel the feelings of the peoople