Writing quality: Good! Little to no error.Good sentencing and paragraphing. Translator also explain the chinese reference.Story development: The premises is good but the delivery and execution is bad. Mc lack braincells sometimes...Character design: They're only so so. Like I said above, mc sometimes lack braincells. I hate the part even knowing that the hoe in the wh*re houe is using him and stuff, he still want to go there. There are some similar things but yeah....World background: Not bad, the premises like I said is interesting, not new but still rare. They're in a murim and a cultivation world together.Overall: I don't recommend investing yo ressources in this but if you want a quick read, sure go for it. It coulda been so much better if a lil bit more effort had gone into it but it is what it is
Very elaborate story. Can only recommend the book. Although it is sometimes a bit unrealistic, it is nevertheless very entertaining. The chapters are rather on the longer side :)
Hope this gets picked up finished the trial read!!!!
So as of the current date, 5/9/20 (9/5/20 for you Euro types) the translation is in serious serious need of an editor that has more than two brain cells rubbing together in their head. That said, while desperately in need of an editor the story itself is still readable, the grammar, while bad, is not MTL-bad.
The story itself, the characters so far, the world, the premise, they're all great, power levels aren't broken as of yet, MC isn't OP just reborn with memories and hella rich. No system or goldfinger. I enjoy these deep dive VRMMO type stories and this one is a nice take on it.
Unlike others who have rated the novel, I believe this story is good. Yes, this type of story might have a similar plot to many others of this genre, but that does not mean it’s bad. Many people don’t realize how hard it is to come up with new ideas and to actually create a new novel. Keep up with the chapters and don’t take those hate comments to heart.
A wonderful and well-written novel. The grammar was great as the sentences flowed nicely! As for the story, it was all well thought and unique compared to most novels on this site. This uniqueness would definitely pay in the long run.
Hope you the best, the novel would be added to my library.
Great book. Author really has put in a lot of detail into his character development. Storyline is worth the read. Very unique and different from what I normally read. Best part is that author is awesome at engaging with his readers shows appreciation for his supporters as well.
A good start.but from the name I thought it would be a cunning mc who has everything on his palm so I m just disappointed that how can mc becomes a demon God when his is a muscle head
I'm really enjoying this so far, the friendship between the MC and his violinist friend is nice and I can't wait to find out more about the situation between the two in the past!
The best novel I have read trust me guys at least read the first chapters 1 till 50 and you will like it . You will keep reading until the **** knows until you reached the last chapter and you crie and pls support the author by power stones or money if you like it and it's up to you guys (For the author I wish I could support you by giving money but I dont have lol) ( for the guys or people reading this comment by the way I dont know the author (I am not his friend) and dont think I support him because his my friend. Because of his work obviously his novel or what you call and hard working and time to write this novel etc. Sorry for English at least you could understand. Finally thank you .
This story begin with a very OP Mc who can summon high level creature and litteraly the definition of OP characters but this is not really a problem for me. They are a lots of novels with OP Mc who is pleasure for reading.The mc class is summoner ?? LONG LIVE TO ALL SUMMONER!!! (FUCK THIS MC).So the problem in this novel is mc personnality, he repeat every second that the Humanity is "HORRIBLE HAAHA FUCK HUMANS ALL OF YOU ARE EVILS" he can save people easy but why if you can be a dark cucklord who just save people with potential that I think will be forgotten in the future.So the is just random dark mc who can't believe in humanity but he think only people with 3 of IQ can read that and should see a shrink.I rarely do 1 ☆ review because if I don't like a story I just drop and leave people like their kind but the story is filled with shit by the author who don't care about other humans(I think he is 40 yo virgin who the GF left him) (all my respect to the virgins)