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I really like this story. it takes a longer slower route then some people like but the characters and story are more flushed out then a lot of others. There is no screaming "you dare", "bow to this young master", or "your courting death" every other chapter.
this story is capitavating research on this story is great but I am waiting for the plot twist in anticipation as always well done author It is clear that the antidote is with a certain blood type group.Is the character going to stay isolated in one house forever or are we expecting a twist I love story plots
Aweasome book ......need more chapters..........Realease chapters fast..........nice book. Will rate it five stars........So much of fun......need more.
it's a great book I just wish it would update faster or something I'm willing to wait but it's been 4 months and I got left on a cliff hanger I just want to know what happens next
your story is Extraordinary with unique
I don't know anything about the world or the cultivation methods, they have barely touched on those topics. For some reason the MC can beat earth grade cultivators (second highest cultivation level we know of as of chapter 40), while basically being a cripple with zero cultivation. I read all 40 chapter and while interested at first, I quickly got bored because of how the author rambles about unimportant things. After reading through these current 40 chapters, I still understand nothing, and thr main character hasn't even started cultivation. 1.75/5
I love this novel. wish there were more chapters available to read but hey all good thing take time. Tarith Nico is best!
Ok so mc is weak and finds metal ball which fuses with him, he instinctually knows how to use it, ok. Makes some sense if you think magic. Then mc gets a gene from food rather than killing an animal, unique. I like. That was chapter 1, from there it goes downhill rapidly. We are introduced to our first trope in chapter 2 or 3 in which we learn that the loser mc is friends with the martial school goddess, at this point every comment i read is people complaining or saying they drop because im leaving out some other reasons this is one star. Anyways, loser mc friends with goddess at start trope, check. Heres where the author makes a bigger mistake, 2 is not better than 1 if people hate 1, especially when the second goddess you add instantly after is the mcs little sister and the guys at the school are jealous of your "luck" with women when ONE OF THEM IS YOUR SISTER!!! Not even stepsister, and i know that wouldnt justify things but a lot of these authors try to justify with that excuse. Also mc stupid and him fighting Du Quan was clear plot force and will lead to cockroach young master being born just cause mc was stupid and chose to fight him when he had no need to, only a made up benefit which even the mc said that he coulda learned at any moment (the wolf technique). I hope this stops some from reading, this is just as bad as legend of the mythological gene and is just chasing after the old fame of it before it got nationalistic.
Now This is How A Reincarnation Novel Should Be!!! OMG Loved This Work ?. MC is calm & cautious which is how a old demon should be, not like an idiot who saves everyone. Also loved how deals with romantic affairs not like typical wuxia mc where they go crazy for a women. Also loved Inquisitor Arc, my god!!! That's how a reincarnation novel should be, mc should hide his cards and vary of others in seeing his brilliance. Man it is so cringy when a typical useless mc uses a fake master for his success and other believes him like a brainless idiot, I loved how this novel showed such realism. Man after Reverend Insanity, this novel is another masterpiece, well not comparable but in line with it. Thanks for this Novel ?
Very interesting concept, have been looking for a novel like this since 'Legendary Mechanic' and I hope this work gets picked up so I can support it and the great author!However this is a very small excert of what seems to be a massive story, so anything can happen when considering writing quality, world building and character development.We can just hope this gets picked and supported properly.
Garbage. There are too many red flags. Poor writing quality, the worldbuilding is annoyingly vague and just badly described, the characters are all obnoxious and the story is just rubbish. There isn't much to say about this novel, the idea of literal body forging seems novel at first glance and probably could be executed well but this novel does a terrible job at adapting it. Decent translation quality though. 0.5/5.
great sm*t novel grammer is bad sometimes all over nice novel
