Feels like a sketch and not a story, idea 5/5, execution 2/5. Feels like a sitcom. Passed me a quick few hours reading through the available chapters.Protagonist could kill high level assassins with a wail when he was just born on chapter 1 but was absolutely "useless" for the next 35~ chapters.This story feels more like a release of frustration through writing than a properly thought through novel.
I love this novel. Reading novels based in Hollywood is something I don't usually do but this one is quite enjoyable. Plus he isn't a hypocrite and is open about his playboy lifestyle which is another plus point.
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theres no emotion or depth, its very bare. every chapter needs more. the chapter i just read "killers" felt flat. he broke their arms and legs, and chased after the ones who ran away just breaking their legs and disarming them. then sophia called the police and they left. that isnt word for word. but its pretty close. no fight scene. no drawn out police questions. the way it reads it was over in less than 5 minutes from start to them leaving. you could double or possibly even triple the length of this book with details.
The story has its faults, but there is a noticeable growth for the author, so I expect this to change into a good story at some point. Author does sadly need an editor to help him or her out with the whole process, as there are mistakes and repetitiveness in the chapters.
hello ... l am an Avid reader of your story such as Immortal Domination:White Emperor and a Big fan of your work EVOLUTION:CONQUER and can't wait to see what you have planned for this story Re-life :life as a demon patriarch as well like. How strong he'll make his daughters or will he make or adopt more children for the clan or how he will manipulate the players I Can't wait!!!???
I found this book interesting. The flow and energy invested by the author is evident. It is an easy story to follow and enjoy. I found the setting fun and intriguing.
shouldn't it be 40 chapters ....
I really like this story and have been reading it for almost a year now and never fail to read an update. The story is intriguing with little hints at what is happening behind the scenes. With the characters having their own unique specialties, it forms unique interactions, in and out of the game.
Sound pretty amazing strory cant wait for officially on qidian ................................................................................................................,.................................................................
In the early chapters, you will go insane. Chapters spent upon some random, evil guy named "Younger" (TL means youngster, but Qidian hires terrible translators). This guy just kills who he wants, takes secret techniques and obviously wants MCs eternal eyes, which should be extinct in this world. The author never even explains how in the f this random guy knows about the eternal eyes. It's as if anyone just knows from one glance at MC.Apparently, he was following a black bear to watch it slaughter some villagers. Our MC was 3 at the time and managed to activate his OP eyes, killing a huge black evil bear before it could harm his pregnant older sister. The evil dude "Younger" then disappears, kills some random elder from the Black Dragon Triad sect, steals his Yin and Yang Heavenly Sword technique and manages to get a pet evil wolf with a slim trace of ancient bloodline. Seriously? Why in the fook should we even care about a random evil guy? So much attention is given to a nobody for so many damn chapters. Then the elder's soul survives, tries to take over MC's body, MC of course wins, and also gets a copy of the Yin and Yang Heavenly Sword technique. Just b.s after b.s lol in this little backwater mountain village, all of this is happening.You will be frustrated so many times, because you can care less about so many of these things that the author shouldn't even mention.
Looks good Please make adetailed summary so we can know more about it And maybe translate 1st chapter so we can judge what the novel is about ?