it just annoyed...translator, you do great job.. but thurst me, I've been reading this and all I wanna say is annoying.MC is trash, she just stupid girl who act like genius. and ML, I don't know why but I hate him.synopsis and story is really different... I was disppointed
It was like she was made perfect for the taking! Be that as it may, he had no idea how to talk to girls…
It took less than ten of seconds for the trolls to recover from the shock, two approached the crouching Hanzo with haste.
"Yes Grandpa"
Seriously? No more updates? Thats depressing I was expecting more chapters and action ever since I started reading it now I'm really feeling bad for picking it up
I am a big fan of post apocalypse novels and when I was looking at this one I saw it had a game like element so I thought I was in for a great read. But as it turns out this novel is a huge disappointment. The translation is so bad and has so many grammar and continuity errors that it pulls you out of the story. But that's not even the worst part! The Mc is hands down the most inconsistent character I have ever seen In all my years reading novels. He can walk in a room see someone and then for no apparent reason have such a deep connection that they are willing to die for each other. I mean??????? What? Who is that? ooooo you use to know her from kindergarten? Ok let's kidnap her and kill her boyfriend she'll be ok with it in a couple of weeks. (That's real by the way not the kindergarten bit but the rest of it is in the book) WHAT!! Why just to add another Harem member?......And the Harem is so bad as he seemed to treat women as consumables and tools as he will use them, drop them and get a newer one. I don't usually mind novels that have breaks in them but that have to be earned and NONE OF THEM ARE! I mean come on in one her literally raped her abandoned her then finds her again kidnapped her killing her boyfriend and innocents of the town and then raped her AGAIN! And it was at that point I lost all hope in this novel sorry but I just can't ignore All that and still route for the Mc no matter how much I love the genre. All and all this was a very promising novel that turned out to be crap.
Nope! Too many POVs! Not interested! See ya!
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Mandatory self-review, obviously.Some might say it's arrogance, others will say it's a fact. Either way, this story is no less than perfection. The true kind.Like a glistening diamond made of blood... Like a heart forged from a trillion wailing souls... Like the love of a God for his creation, moments before cleansing the universe with sacred flames.It is just that.Absolute. Perfection.PS: The story had already more than 200 chapters written, so I will be uploading a few times a day until I catch up.
Well I didn't find the synopsis quite captivating but the novel was interesting and a wonderful book. I think you must recheck and make some changes in your novel. I noticed some errors but apart from that, it's a great book.
The author is here with a shameless self-review.After writing the first volume of this book, I found there are some fatal flow that I made.First of all, typos (Sometimes I wrote a word in the wrong arrangement, for example: taht) and mistranslation (There are some words in my language that I don't understand how to put into sentences in English).Secondly, the most fatal one, I turned Alex into a female. Yes, maybe a lot of my readers dislike it and dropped this book at that part. However, he becomes a male again in the next few chapters.Thirdly, the last one, I rarely interact with you guys, I wish we could interact more often.
Really like the book, author keeps his update schedule consistent. good book and author