shoud it not have been released yesterday????????????????????????????????????????????????????
the way to hook readers to the story!starts with the bitter past of rose makes me sympathetic towards her.I like how the storyline is created and chapters are linked to each other next thing I know I was at the 4th chapter.all in all great work author. keep it up
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amazing....i recommend it for cultured men ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I love everything From his simple antics with nao and shu to the romance that develops later onFrom the one kick "fights" to )the actual fights against stronger cultivatorsFrom the slight overshadow on the early chapters to the massive world on later onesThe caracter development as well is amazingOnly complaint...It doesn't upload chapters every second
I really enjoyed the story, since he's gaining followers he should give them the white karma and adopt them into his clan.So yeah so far so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????
I is a cliche story, but the execution and romance and everything is well writen
1. good story all in all but there a lot of plot armor and plot convenience so if you dont like those warning. 2. as pinoy myself all i can say is "NOICE".3. HOPE YOU PUT THE 9 MOON/SUN EATERS (PICTURE BELOW)
It is a pretty good novel and it has an excellent translator. The only problem I had reading this was that it seemed more of a list of events happening than a story. the transitions between events were very inorganic and history-textbook-like (not the case for the first arc against his brother). the Wars are very bland and lack the taste of strategy. (this is due to the fact that mc is more technologically advanced). this fact is well established. however, you would assume that other counts and viscounts have their own spy network that specializes in espionage and information gathering. The author leans into "other characters underestimate the mc" a bit too much. It almost feels like he is trying to make the MC an emperor as fast as he can, which in turn messes with the story development and kingdom building.
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Halo reader, i wrote this review after writing 70+ chapters and read hundreds of comments. So here is my honest review on my own work.1. Its a slow start, i know the trending novel are currently a fireworks from the start. OP item or skill, etc. This one is a classic weak to strong novel. Even i dont really like the MC at the start. But i assure you it will change.2. As much as it said historical, its not really true. It based on real world history but its still a fiction novel, so hope you enjoy the alternate earth.3. The world and characters are the one i am confident with. i took a lot of time on them, but you can be the judge of that.4. The grammer and writing stability should improve much from my last novel as i have more experience now. But please be forgiving if there still some mistake, as english is my second language.Please give the novel a try and hope you can enjoy the adventure of Emery and how he became the earth's greatest magus.
Wow! interesting