Reading this felt like a weird theory that worked, dont ask me what that means as I do not know
to be honestly I will say it is good for the noob readers ...it will make old readers fill sick ...to sick ...MC use his power for what save people... randomly .lol that's to out of line ....and it's feels like it was writin by a child rather then adult.?
brilliant work. it has to be selected no matter what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
See now its stories like this that make you wonder what's going on in the authors/writers mind, but you can't help but keep reading because you're just really enjoying it. Maybe a little too much.
It's fun to read, id like to see mc have less frequently new woman but when he does it should be very special. But i like it as it is (give him dragon loli empress plz^^}
Muy interesante, me encantan este tipo de fanfics, solo algunos pequeños errores pero gran trabajo.Por favor no la dejes caer. Tienes todo mi apoyo.
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too much unnecessary information such as everyone reaction and very less focus on mc or story.in short more than half content is irrelevant and focus should be the mc and its power instead of others reaction.very slow progress.
Started reading and found that it has some good potential but I didn't really enjoy it much after he met the main side character who may or may not be a love interest? It just dulled the story to me.
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It is a pity, that this book was not trasnslated. This is one of the most unique story in this site. Abd tge mtl is practically unreadable. n
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