The writing quality, the pace and the way the story is told, the lenght of the chapters, even the styling of the sentences... I think that I like almost everything about this book.It is definitely worth taking a look at.
Chapter 5 Sitll UntitleIn this eating day Urdin has eaten five (5) spiders including spider killed by black spider. With Tra Mor Ver One on his back Urdin looking for his next target but what he got. . . . .four (4) spiders join together to kill him. Two of them intercepted Urdin from the front, while the other 2 prevented him from fleeing."Wow, spider are working together. They know how to use strategy gang me up so can beat me."This is first time Urdin against group of spider. "R~Overfangs"One down. Only left three (3) spiders, one (1) in front of me and two (2) behind me. Two of them who behind me try to bite me. They got my two (2) legs which i use them for rush. I can not escape if only i use my legs so only one option i have kill 'em all.
Haven't read it yet but... That synopsis LOL!!5 stars for DOVID-20!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Why isn't new chapter comming????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Did something happen to author???????????????????
I have rated it 2... The reason is the world background and the writing quality. Although Story updating quality is good but there are too many grammatical mistakes. I too had some grammatical mistakes when I released my first book WarCraft Online... Please If you need some ideas to correct the World Background contact me I will be more than happy to help you... Hope you do well All the best for future...
realy cool concept, I hope it continues, hooked already .
la historia tiene un comienzo presentable, tiene un desarrollo posterior que no es desconocido, sin mucha novedad, es muy apegado a lo estándar de novelas de sistemas, como para complacer a los lectores que gusten de este estilo de lecturas, en cuanto a los supuestos reinos del cultivos y las rarezas de las cosas,plantas, materiales, se nota una desgana en cuanto a su contexto, es decir, son solo nombres vacíos, solo se colocaron como para que quepa en un supuesto de un entorno de mundo de cultivo, por eso no es tan recomendable
Mc realy idiot Histoire intéressant mais le mc est trop con il fais des chose et après ce rencontre il y a peut être un problème J'aime un mc fort mais intelligent
opening was not that great needless face slapping, it's is I the waste, I have returned! waste your are not worthy of elder sister, etc and slow updates.
A very interesting novel, World building is very good ,Rivalry is very well built even main character is well built.