Love it so much. 11/10; better than perfection. Every aspect about it is perfect, yet it somehow keeps getting better. The chapters come out fast, but it's so good that I have to re-read while waiting for the next chapter of those heavenly divine words to come out. Some of the chapters I read a lot over and over again ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) if you get my meaning. It's easy to see that the author puts a lot of effort into this divine novel.
The highschool experience, depicted so well from all that comes with it. I like the way the main character seems to be in connection with teens. The plot develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful. A great read.
Hello there, it is me, the author!I'll be reviewing my novel even though it's quite late already.First, what I want to say is that, the quality of the works I can't guarantee, maybe it's cause I'm new, I'm hesitant about a few things and can't fully express what i wanted to portray in the story.For updating stability.... uhm.. hehe, I'm not sure about that one as well.But anyways, after all my flaws is resolve, I will for sure try to improve this work with a few edits.So, finally, please do support my novel even if it's lacking quite a lot in some aspect. Thank you!
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The story line seems okay, it's really hard to read due to the numerous grammar mistakes but those can be solved easily. I was confused at the flashback as I did not really know what was happening. Also, it would be nice to have a clear example of the currency, what are moon coins in pounds or yen?Apart from that, it seems to be thought out and there is clearly effort put in here, good job!
This novel start with a good line. The starter stories is good. But this is still the beginning. Waiting 4 more elebotation about the situation in mc. I shall await more chapter. Good job author.
I'm writing review 1 because I can :p but other then that just to mention a few things I write this book because I've wanted to write a book for a long while now but have constantly told myself otherwise. Ive told myself that it would turn out bad or I would quickly get bored but I want to prove myself wrong. I have high motivation right now so chapter will be coming out quickly but at bare minimum I hope to at least get out 1 chapter a week
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Synopsis states MC name is Ryan, then it is Lin Lie, then linley. That and the start just seems all over the place.,..........................
The writing quality is not bad. I loved the prologue and the intro. It was intense and heart-wrenching. But you should write "I am" instead of just writing "am..."The characters were interesting too. You did made effort to introduce each character individually, giving them more depth. I liked the flashbacks of some characters which showed their depressing past, as it made them more 'real'.You are doing great, and I'm sure you can improve even further! ?