oh boy...this one's a case of where the packaging looks decent but you take a bite and you get a mouth full of sawdust...In the first chapter it says he made a guild together with a friend who then later betrayed him in his first life. Not only does said friend never show up in the early chapters, the MC proceeds to narrate that he never joined a Guild in his last life a few chapters in.Like hello? I know you just slapped a few cliches together and called it a novel but at least keep your facts straight jesus...
There are things i like about this story and others I really don't like. Despite being modeled after your basic Wuxia novel, I like that AGB has a unique world with a pretty cool cultivation system, However, my biggest gripe is with the MC. He's apparently 6 years old and thinks, talks and acts like an ***** but you've given no explanation for why that is. It's not like he's reincarnated. Also, the MC is plain dumb. He's made at least half a dozen bad decisions in first 5 chapters.All in all this would be a much better read if the MC's character traits are ironed out.
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Almost slept reading this...not gonna lie but the genre itself is boring i love how everyone is making similar novels cause this genre got popular and most of them are direct copies ...Anyway i almost fell asleep reading this dropping in chapter 10
so i read it all like the 10 chapters and it pretty good I can say their are some grammatical errors but they are like 1 in a 140 word I have great expectations from this story it's good keep up bro
great story, love it so much. writing quality is good, story development is great, character is likeable, more update please, world background is very interesting. I really hope to read more of it. thank you author, keep it up.
So yeah I'm not gonna go into details because someone else already did but I just wanna say that you should really read this book if you're looking for a real sect development story with little to no cliche and above all a slow and steady story instead of a fast paced one where mc becomes op just in 2 chapters. yeah so that was a little long but who cares. continue like this author you're doing a great job.
This book is quite an interesting one. Although it doesn’t have much of the “promised” assassinations as I wished for, it has a quite good lead and story. A novel with a story that includes things of family and relationship development. It’s a well laid back novel although there are some quirks I have with this novel. These quirks are how the MC is just overall too underpowered - his wife was just some random homeless girl he fancies basically but she got stronger than him..., the kid that his wife had previously also is stronger and beat him in a match because of techniques (but realistically this shouldn’t happen... the difference in power is immense... basically like saying a highly skilled child in martial arts is able to beat a trained soldier who doesn’t have formal training of the arts), the amount of depressing chapters of rap* and people taken advantage even though it kinda doesn’t do anything for the story. I’d have to rate this out of the novels I’ve read a read but be sure you are able to hold in the pain for some scenes depicted. (THIS REVIEW IS MY OPINION and although it may be a little indifferent to others deal with it)TLDR: Read but hold in pain and clench for some scenes. The family moments are enjoyable to read though. Also don’t expect too much assassinations.
Decent translation, but that’s all. The basic idea is interesting but the MC is unrealistic and illogical, conflict is boring and very, VERY forced, and every single character is unlikeable and unremarkable. This book isn’t worth anyones time, skip for your own sake.
love the novel, it's fun to readalso probably one of the best idol/vtuber novel I've read on webnovel, though probably because there isn't any vtuber/idol novel that is still continuing, but even if there was a lot of vtuber/idol novel, I could still confidently said that this is one of the best novel I've readFYI webnovel tend to be... difficult sometimes and delete the draft chapter or the already published chapter... so just be ready to have some backup if that do happen again
I am seriously loving this bookThis power is more than just OPAll hail the birth of the Divine Gaze EmperorAm sssssseeeeriously reading this book till the end
Интересная работа, но действия главного героя кажутся слегка поспешными, хотя он пока не сильно вмешивался в канон, поэтому не могу с уверенностью этого сказать. Описание мира хромает, а точнее его практически нет, не говорилось о той же хотя бы как пример, STAR labs. Что "STAR" – это название его секретной лаборатории, всё таки удалось догадаться только в дальнейшем, по действием героя на локации и по следующим упоминаниям. Никакого описания персонажей ни, банально, внешности, ни костюмов, что весьма важно учитывая сюжет сосредоточенный на деятельности героев. Язык повествования не плох, но и чего-то такого уж хорошего я в нём не заметила. А так сама идея довольно интересна и если будет продолжение, то скорее всего, буду читать