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I think that you should work on the characters backstory and make them more fleshed out and more real, the world building is great and keep updating
just gonna say that the novel would be better if you could lessen the drama a bit. like the story is good but it's kind of revolving around drama first his eyes part good and i like it then the family love was ok ii accepted it but when the part comes that his teacher is being all emotional with him and i kind of disliked it . i know he is a kid but i still think you should lessen the drama.
Time to guess all the possible real names of the members.Handsome Guy With Lightning Bolt should be Zeus. Dominator of the Sea is of course Poseidon, he is the most famous.Grandpa With Magical Power is Odin, due to being portrayed as quite old and knows about Ragnorok, an event only in Norse mythology.A Fireball In My Hand... should be Prometheus, as he "gave" the fireball to humanity, which was the creation of fire.Most Beautiful Goddess should be Aphrodite, in mythology considered the most beautiful greek goddess. Her comparison is between her Roman name ( Venus ) with Athena, one of the other few relevant goddesses.Golden apple should be based on the legend of the golden apple, of which it eliminates most gods, leaving only Athena, Hera, and Aphrodite. Due to Athena's divinity being war and wisdom, the only one left should be Hera. Edit : Golden Apple and Most Beautiful Goddess, Hera and Aphrodite can be intermatched.
Its a low-key MC in style from the sign in novels and since i enjoy these normally i read the mtl up to ch. 60 and then i dropped it.Its not that it is Bad, its just very very slow and too detailed.What i mean with it is that half of the novel is item-descritions from stuff he gets and honestly its get boring to read the 50 description of a item that he will probably never use.Add that to the fact that there are few timeskips and you often feel bored and that nothing had happend.On the Plus side when stuff happens its Actually fine/good just not enough to motivate me, but maybe with Translation its better so when you like sign-in in more Detail then its for you.
it nice to read and it is so interesting
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I have to say, the first chapter was well written. I also do like the concept of a sin system, it's very unique. I can say that , from the first chapter and the unique concept, this novel has a lot of potential. You've got my interest, so wil keep an eye out for further chapters.
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The story is great, not cliche like most of the Chinese novels with the constant face slapping that happens each chapter. No crappy auction arcs or saving an old man that is actually influential or anything, no immortal cultivation bull****, just magic and qi. and the mc is actually kinda smart and doesn't make enemies left and right. It's just sad that there are only 60 chapters.
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I love this!!!This is fun and cool!!Read this!!Highly recomended!!The pace is slow, gloomy, and interesting! I liked it!Fantasy, Reincarnation, and Game!!