I really want to drop this novel after reading more than 150 chapter for once I never could understand with the timeline being this far in future and technology seemingly so advanced why our MC never once did change his face despite having Mu and Shang. And he has gone to all three powers there are and has shown his face to all there as well has given his name for everyone to know. Even if Mu erases everything from databases but there are people who have seen him already and they can easily construct his 3d face to search and find him anywhere like instructor HAK. But coming so far in novel our MC has never been corrected here nor has learned his lesson. I really feel like dropping it at every chapter.
Didn't thought that I would get hook in the story but even then, there's still something I don't quite accept like instead of the male lead to look like enchanting, shameless or somewhat flirty, he gives more of a vibes of a pervert for me(esp some of his actions).Also, the way the author made the Mc hide her capabilities is a bit over the top that would make it looks suspicious instead. Imagine, she needs to hide her capabilities to avoid the same situation that happened to her father but she made her academic score at the bottom of the class instead of atleast at mid rank. Doesn't that look more suspicious instead? But since it already happened that way, then atleast it can be regarded as passable if you don't care too much.The main reason this novel got me hook is because of the characters. I just found them funny(not the ml who looks like not into any character really) and that's it.
Dialogue is so confusing
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This book is honestly great. There are many books with 18+ but no plot.. but this one has a good plot and also 18+. This is quite interesting seeing cultivators in the modern world and stuff... and the origin of the MC is also very mysterious. He has the top physique in the world and imo he uses it greatly. He is definitely not a simp or petty as other MCs out there and his character is very likable from the start. Perfect combo of action, cultivation, romance, a slice of life, and quite mystery with some comedy. This book is worth spending money on!Throughout the Heaven and Earth I alone am the Honoured One!!Nah I'd win!
The update is slow but I love the story line.
Pumpkin pumpkins pumpkin pumpkin. Over all a great novel soooooo dropped a fat gift. Love the idea of pumpkinmancer lol ????????????
best novel in trail read should definitely get picked up ............... .............................................................
The set pace of the story and immersion is good, and the story concept is certainly not the mainstream and unique thus attracting readers right in. The only problem which I seem to find is the abrupt shift in the first-person and third-person narrative but that could be just my opinion may be fair to others. Keep it up Author, never stop dreaming.
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I haven’t read this book yet but it looks good’s
This is very good. I read hundreds, if not thousand of novels and can't get excited about them easily anymore. This one was different. It is one of the novels that will light a spark in you. If the author keeps this up, the novel will become the next cultivation novel classic.