If this is a translation, it needs an english editor to correct lots of sentence structures and others.
The plot is going to be very scary I am reading this novel for a while and I don't know why but he deleted all the chapters and reposting them with some changes.Believe me you're gonna like it very much.
for gender bender fans, this truly was a novel with great potential. it's a shame that this was discontinued. there's only so many good gender bender content and it's a shame that novels with potential are dropped just like that
Don’t need to say much things. just read it and decide yourselves. If you are not into mmorpg or video games or or or not even playing any games you can still find this funny but can’t understand much. Anyway. Good piece
So far everything is going pretty well, both sides (Nero, aka. Naoko and the King/other heroes) has been giving enough detail on whats happening. Writing Quality- Although somethings get kinda repetitive, the quality is still pretty good, up to my standards, its alright. Stability of Updates- The author updates this story quite often, I feel satisfied for this part so far.Story Development- This story is more fast paced and if you don't like fast paced then I don't think you should read it; but for me I like it, fast paced stories are my thing.Character Design- The author doesn't fail for designing his characters. So far, every time we have a new character arrive the author explains them in detail, doe sometimes I feel like he does get a bit lazy but I also get lazy in my writing so I really have no complains in this section.World Background- Although the author focuses more on the character development and story/plot, the world background are explained little by little. It is not like some novels where they explain the whole world in one chapter. The author gives us details about the world in some chaps and not other while making things clear and understanding.Overall, for my preferences, I give this novel 5/5 so far. I'm really liking how things are going so far. Every thing is going smoothly for me so far, I hope to see more great things in the future.
hm very good story i love just how the mc is ohh and please like up ⏬⤵️⬇️?⬇️⤵️⬇️⤵️⤵️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️???????????????????????
well well...another work of brother Paranoid, what can I say, if you have already read his previous works then in this novel you will get surprised because author improved quite a lot ,for example you can see he is using more new vocabularies ( and it seems he also calmd down his fetishes too? ) and grammars are also better but sometimes still you can find some misspelled words or repeated ones...the story is cliche at the start but it will turn into a interesting plot, for a fantasy story it's good...the romance part is also satisfying and is not rushed...but at the beginning you will think MC has some mental problems but don't think too much about it...?and for the harem part, I can't say much now since MC has 1 wife till now and another woman who is in love with him too till chapter 59, but author said it will not be a big harem ...so give this novel a try you will not get disappointed ??...Update stability: 7/10Writing quality: 7/10Characters: 8/10World background: 9/10Romance: 7.5/10Author interaction with readers: 10/10
Great story. The grammar needs a little work. But all in all great story, good plot and the MC is cool. Hope you can post the chapters more frequently but i'm rushing you just asking. ????
Interesting story. It begins in a very unique way and has quite a lot of potential. There aren't too many stories following villainous characters and reincarnation stories are, in my opinion, always fun. Especially when its a villain being reincarnated! It seems like it'll be a very fun story and I can't wait to read more.
I used to snort when I saw an author rate their own work 5 stars, but now I embrace the hypocrisy!This is my first attempt at writing since I was 13 and wrote awful, terrible Dragonriders of Pern fanfics. This might not be much better, but ill try.
writing this just after volume 4 (148), great world building, nice way of incorporating the other worlders and the magic system is well developed. characters are unique, the world is unique and the story is only just getting started (up until this point)
it started well in the first episodes, but then it became stupid the character also begins to depend on the system, gradually, every time he jumps a level, someone two or three levels up needs his blood to develop again, and the speed of development is very slow