He gave a nonchalant grin, slowly sipping his latte. "Yo! This is some good shit! You're like gifted in tea crap or whatever. We should really come here more often, like holy crap! And uh, yeah. Marco, what do we do now."
Raynare : No more exams!!! I hate them!!!
~sigh~ "I should have guessed...well, I still have more in my wallet, let's go to eat".
Her forehead pinched, but she didn't press him. Pointing to a water clock a few stores down, she said, "It's a few minutes passed midnight. Officially it's your free day. I'll see you in 24 hours."
More updates please
"Hey so where are you from?"
[Worry not! Although my strength is powerful, I'm still inside your body and your asura gates had also effects on my spiritual sense outside, and it's very faint. It could be detected; however, I believe there's no such thing on this place would be able to sense this extremely faint spiritual sense.]
"H-Help…" the other woman tried saying before a slender hand holding an elegant handkerchief covered her mouth, soon making her eyes lose focus.
Echidna : "Yes… But it's somewhat controversial to call it a planet… Anyway, The Garden of Eden."
Not a bad read sadly the author suffers from a bad case of mystery hook syndrome. This has a making of a great novel but due to the author's lack of experience and the incessant desire to be mysterious with the mc's gender it just killed the whole novel. See you need identity to make your mark, but due to the desire of the author the mc is coming out as some confused bisexual individual. And you can see this on the sly sexual comments the author adds to add to the confusion. Fun read but utterly frustrating on some part. Can be a good read when you run out of other books to read.To the author i suggest you pick up David Eddings work. Read Belgariad Series, Mallorean Series, Belgarath the Sorcerer, Polgara the Sorcerers then finally the Rivan Codex. Youll thank me later.
Writing Quality: The author describes the scenes vividly. His/her vocabulary is vast, I spotted little to no redundant words.Story Development: It was all good. But the opening is quite cliche, I often read on those old generation novels. Tho, it wasn't a bad thing. The author almost perfectly done what's needs to be done on the first 3 chaps. Like, reader's substitution to the MC. Letting us know the circumstances, the world building, and so on.Character Design: The MC is Multidimensional. His character was done well. As for the side characters, it's easy to imagine how they are like. The way the author describes their traits is commendable.Updating Stability: Not badWorld Background: It was interesting! Especially his new family and the hints. Overall: From the scale 1-10, this book scored 8. It's not bad!
Will the romance/harem be anything like your other novel?