interesting. unusual character and plot.
apparently it's trash in the later chapters he apparently makes clones and they do the work instead of him I truly them since alot has said it and it has that feeling but just keep reading it maybe it's because of translation
Mega ciekawe, bardzo mi się podoba. ❤ Mam nadzieję że dodasz więcej chapter w najbliższym czasie
Personaly it's the best novel i have probably read so far and i have read a lot... I realy recomend it. It has wresh, new story. The the emotional detail is realy something. If you want to quit at first school part just read a bit more you won't regret it.
This is probably the best novel released this time, man the character growth is awsome and quick, so its not off putting. The MC is also smart. This novel reminds me of castle of black iron and how zhang tie was a pure badass at the start of the novel. Simply its a really good novel so please vote so we can read more.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapters so please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it and please don’t stop writing this book
THIS IS A CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK REVIEW AND DOES NOT PROBABLY RELATE TO THE CURRENT NOVEL'S TRUE RATING
The novel was surprisingly good. If I were to say anything, you just need to reread your chapters more and put in commas at certain places. Only typo I noticed was you put ,., somewhere at the start I think. Noticed you aren't putting in commas before ands and buts a lot.
Also for the story, its not realistic how he found the cube at that place. Countless people visit there every year, how was he the first to find and pick it up after (assuming its from ancient Greece) centuries have passed?
Also I would change up your start. Its not interesting for readers to read flasbacks at the start of a book. This is why whe there are flash backs, its always way farther into the book or movie if its poplar.
You should also consider a Prologue. This is how you grab people's attention, and interest. This is how they survive the first few chapters. I myself was not interested at the start, but I kept reading.
Now I noticed two big plotholes of your story. One is he put countless death marks, but when you jumped into levels, he barely died that much, also he only marked at the start. Then its as if his flashback persnality disapeared and his whole personality changed. As I've read a lot of books and I am also an author, I can guess that the flashback isbfor way farther into the book, but guarantee 99% didnt think that much and just ignored it or thought the book was stupid and left.
Second one are the stats, you made stat points really low, but whe MC gained stats rivaling the police officers, he was more macho and studd compared to them? Even more than that scrawny asian guy you said?
Also try to describe emotions and five senses more, was bit bland reading. Try to describe things more, and add more relatable thing so its not 2D.
Lastly I marked 3 for updates as long hiatus. I would've done two, but looking at your past record and past two days, nearly updated every day so bumped it up to 3. It would've hit four or above if not for that.
you need to read this story it's really good to keep it up and don't drop................................................. Don't know why it's not getting attention .............................................
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this ****. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna take a **** much. If this novel got some drive, thank God its still alive.
never seen such a unique novel
the world of the novel grows at a good pace
the worlds lore is interesting
each chapter complements each other
the authors implementation of the system was done very nicely
BEST NOVEL SO FAR
Why does Webnovel bring back novels that are trash, do you think second time is a charm in this scenario? The other NEW novels were put on hold for a week due to this novel