Great story with great potential.
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Well written. The characters are relatable even though they are made up. The MC is thank god also unique. After reading stories that are near copies of each other, reading this, has been very refreshing and fun. I'm not disappointed for spending money on this story
not a bad novel..
pretty good read..
I always look at author's note first. When the author asked on his author note, Are you ready? I did not know what I should be ready for. and now, I know what he was warning me about. the author is seriously way beyond a master narrator's skills. The unbridled rage and jealousy I feel is just eating my heart's out! Now, I just feel really inferior to the way the author narrates. truly, this is a beautiful beautiful book, that I just really love to hate. and one more thing, about the villains, how dare you make me understand the motivations behind the villain's actions. nooooo! I clearly am not ready for this book! Now I hate asking you for review, but I seriously, Seriously, admire you!
Although the the system isnt too pervertedly possessing type but the way the beasts talk , think , This Is just ridiculously stupid
So far i found the plot interesting.
its a bit to early to say about the what is going on.
the games in novel are simple but with a twist interesting.
I hope that more the games related chapters.
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
Love it
What a nice story. I liked the names of the characters and the dialogues are written wonderfully.
There are some errors, like tenses that are easily fixable. Do try using Grammarly app. It helps a lot.
Overall it's a good novel keep it up.
Another cultivation power fantasy that starts off very slow but has the potential to be really good. This may be the book for you so give it a try.
I am not really a fan of gaming books but the book was interesting. The character and plot were well developed. However, I feel that to help the reader understand the urgency of Dr Wu's experiment. The author should have given them a better insight into 'GOD' tyrannical rule. That way the reader would understand why Alexiel and Dr Wu were willing to risk their lives. instead of making it feel like they were doing so because the writer said so or because the plot needed them to do so.
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