Thanks for warning ⚠️ not gonna read
This novel is completed with last chapter, change the status.
Oh god i read the title wrong
Does it get interesting??
Ch51, the only problem I have with this story is that the MC has become full with disapointment that the way he sees his skills are normal or even average at best, I mean, come'on man, your skills are already at Returning to Origin levels
Jajajaj ella lo supo en cuanto la vio y acertó que venía de un burdel xD
The writing, grammar wise, is fairly terrible. It’s all in passive voice, so everything sounds funny. It makes it less enjoyable to read. Honestly it seems to be on purpose to make the word coung longer. Even if English isn’t your first language, you have to actively try to sound like Yoda all the time. I think the wrong tense choice is also because of everything being in passive voice.
Grammar aside, the story is wonderful thus far. Interesting magic system and world development. It’s not one size fits all, you have X tiers of power with X subtiers. It seems different enough to stick out, but not unnecessarily complicated just to be different.
It's just amazing, absolutely amazing honestly, all your books are every one of themhaven't found one that is not good[img=Loving it]
I didn't expect that I would like it but I actually did, the story was very entertaining. I really recommend this novel.
This story has potential to draw the reader in. I admire your work. The characters are beautifully plotted. Keep writing like this. I would like to read more.
this is an entertaining, enticing and book with a lot of potentials.i have read many magical realism novels, but this novel is more than what I have read in terms of quality.the character design and setting is incredible.keep the great work author,also I highly recommend this book to my fellow readers.i hope you drop another amazing novel however in the mid time reading over again won't be exhausting.
give some 5 stars