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Another solid showing from I Eat Tomatos! He has a reputation for being a remarkably consistent author, and Flying Sword is no exception. This particular work dodges some of his common tropes, the story starts with the main character already quite powerful relative to most people in the world and his mom is even alive! However, it doesn't mix it up that much. The main character is still just a generally honorable guy, albeit a little unforgiving towards his enemies, who works hard to grow strong so he can protect his family and loved ones. If you've read any of IET's other works you'll pretty much know what to expect and whether you'll like this or not.I will say the setting in Flying Sword is a spot weaker than some of his other works, there's no big mysteries or overarching wars or anything like that to build a early sense of mystery and help exploring the world seem engaging and interesting. And the cultivation system seems relatively ******, with even the highest power levels seemingly explained early on. But given that we're only 191 chapters in it may have some big surprises yet to be revealed, if it turns out to be a longer work!And of course there's nothing bad to be said about the translation - CKtalon is probably known to pretty much anyone who's been reading webnovels for a while and he remains a reliable and high quality translator!
where is the statsguy ..........waiting for you stats god hopefully this one has a better update speedp.s. how do I rate without even a proper synopsis
Wonder if the MC will be similar to how the old master of the comic "Master of lightning knives". Interested in reading about a nice bond developing. There's other novels with the same premise on this platform, but they tend to go downhill. Comedy keep the story alive.
Did anyone read the master key and sedatives part? In the criminal justice system, sexually based offenses are considered especially OK. In Qidian, the lazy authors who write about these vicious felonies are members of an elite squad known as the Special Victims Books. These are their stories. Tan Tan.
The story is fairly good (basic but good) but the translation drags it down tremendously. Unable to properly state the rules of the world, making it feel flimsy, character description suffering the same. Numbers are irrelevant as usual with shoddy translations, but the general gist still comes across if you're paying attention.
The worst novel I ever read Thanks!
It´s an really interesting story, and has a high potential, but the writer still needs much more practise. The scenen changes are too quick and comes almost unannounced. Most of the time I am thinking, "What is now going on?" only to find out that there happened a scene change. The characters are partly interesting, but to plain and especially the MC is a bit unsteady in his behavouir. First he wants not to be used, then he goes with the flow just because of something. What´s the most unnerving ist the too quick development. Parts aren´t really good explained and not as exciting as they could be. Especially i would wish that the parts in them something gets explanied to other characters, like where they explain that he got that invitation in chapter 40, would a bit more elaborate. The last thing is the grammar, there are a lot places where there should be comma´s and so on. In the end it is really good material for an good story, but it got bad realised..
Im looking at a phenomenal novel with tremendously high potential which can practically go to the top if it's safe from anything ruin it i wish you the best my brither
Naisu! Naisu! Naisu! I'd say these three words only buh this is a review soooI wuv this novel! Everything's great! Characters, plot and all. Heck, those fight scenes keep me tied to it. ? Who knows, I may borrow your writing style.Welll, novel's great and I'm sticking with it! Keep up the good work author XD
Evaluation: Below AverageWQ: Several gramm errors which doesn't greatly affect the story itself. Several repeated dialogue & redundant thought process. 3/5SD: With a slow to average pace development which greatly affects the story & MC progression that resulted in several plot holes. 3/5CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are severely lacking. His powers are OP (High regen/intelect & technopathy) but was nerfed as per your portrayal which is contradictory. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for marvel-verse. 2/5US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed & tons of redundancy. 3/5WB: it's already at Chapter39 however it is still in it's beginning phase & it lacks exploration which is a let down as marvel-verse is very broad. 3/5Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD