This fucking bastard put out another nightmarishly bad novel and forgot to put a futanari Tag for futanaris that were so completely uncalled for...
i just read 15 chapter but so far so good seems promising and a lot of chapter what do you need more than that to start your reading expérience gonna enjoy it now will come back on this review if needed :)
Captivating read already, cant wait for more chapter uploads. Well written and easy to read. Characters are relatable and I formed a like towards them as the story developed. Excellent novel, well done.
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Is it just me or Shi Hao’s innocent trait changing to shameless one happened too fast? I was reading it and i loved how the little guy, even though he lost his supreme bone and everything he deserves, He still manged to retain his pure heart, forgiving attitude and innocent thinking thats why the Deity Tree liked him but then after a few chapters he suddenly turned into a shameless, lustful and revenge-seeking devilish brat. I was really surprised when it happened, i thought i skipped some chapters or something.Shi hao didnt harass the first batch of girls that came into the story Unlike the latter ones. In fact he was portrayed as a pure and innocent little guy and when girls come they adore him as a cute and innocent child but then after travelling,he somehow changed and every girl he sees gets harassed verbally. You know the fatty(boobs and butt) thingy. Like he wants to bring a girl to his village and raise her to be a fatty so that he can have his favorite milk and have a baby.i dont see the reason how he became like that. Is it puberty? I mean he didnt encounter a seducing woman or something to trigger that change right?I loved the innocent shi hao and shameless shi hao im not against it or something, in fact i love it but at least give a reason or event that justifies his traits turning into a different one.Anyway its a good story!! ❤️ If you love OP shotas then you gotta read this!!
I expect very little but, at the very least, it sounds interesting so that's good.@*adddddhdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjddjdjdjdjddjdjddjdddjddjdjdjdjdj
Lmao I read it at centinni.com, and it has 65chaps now. ..........................................................................................
There are entire chapters misplaced and there are only 40 chapters right now. The consistency is nonexistent, and the experience gain doesn’t make sense. There are too many early time jumps that don’t make sense. Does not seem like there is much planning for the future
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moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!It would be great if he became a billionaire and create your own virtual reality games companies and become the most powerful person in the world and at the same time level up with a good background story and a harem of beauties.
Copy paste from "red packet server"... Not a fanfic for any wechat related cultivation novel folks, it's copy paste... Let's see if the author will shut up or will he come out and say that he post it here because he's a fan or something...
I dunno if it's just because I've read too much stories...bur I found this plot too typical.The characters seems to have no distinction and while the writing itself is not bad and it is stable, there are no particular part that make it different than the other similar stories. The emotional part of characters are simply not there... Like when MC got his past lifes memories, he should have more reaction to it such as fear, shock, confusion, and who am I? Ren? Or am I *blah past lifes names*? And, another thing is even when he accept the past lifes memories, if a child got memories out of nowhere they will be influenced by it. It will create trouble. The personalities of his past lifes will not be easily resolved like you seemingly written.