I'd say read & judge it yourself .......don't depend on these fakes .
Why does it say eight year old but has the harem tag??? Sussy webnovel. Pedophilia isn't something to advertise. Hopefully he grows up into an adult before that harem tag comes into play
The story is fast paced and skips over the unnecessary details. Overall, despite it being the stereotypical martial arts story, it was a pleasant read and I recommend it.
One of the best novels I have ever read.?? From the very beginning, it is extremely catchy and interesting. ?????A must read novel.❤❤
Hi Fallen Ghost!I have to say that I am amazed with the storytelling style. Each chapter was packed with action and narration. While one would expect the narration to be mere fillers, it actually contains in-depth details about this world of magicak kingdom where the story takes place.Lindley the protagonist was a very cheerful and modestly happy guy at the beginning but things quickly took a dark turn right at the first chapter.The story pace was amazing and engaging. The grammar and structures are impeccable. Readers who like magical medieval stories with magical beasts and leveling and system should definitely stop by! Extremely well-written story, wonderful job!
After reading for 10+ chapter, I simply lost interest. The MC is so stupid and cowardly and the first heroine (maybe?), Aleshia is simply dislikeble. It doesn't matter if her sister is sick and in need of money, she will kill anyone for money. The best I could feel toward her is dislike, no way I felt sympathy for her, just like she doesn't care about her victim. I tried to read the summary for chapters 1-37, but still not found any interest.
Fellow Game Genre Author Here! I have my own book that I'm writing in this genre with a similar start and I can tell this author is going to take a new route and divert from cliches. At least that's what I see so far @3 chapters. I wanted to take my game novel a different route and I am happy to see that someone else is doing the same! I am very curious to see how innovative this book gets. Because we need creativity and fresh ideas.As for the update frequency, it's still too early to tell but I will add to my collections so I know when he updates.His writing, story development and character are looking good so far.As for world building, I hope to see more in the future. I want to see how he builds his/her game world.It's still too early to tell if we will be getting a proper game world so I will not deduct any star for that at the moment.It's a thumbs up from this bro!
The author came to my home and started beating me to make me rate the book?.
It's a nice story with good background . You may tend to keep reading when you start because of the thril to know another world .In short it's a nice pick to read.
First of all don’t judge this novel based on author’s previous work. This novel is totally different and it is unbelievable how an author could improve so much.
I will do this review in two parts, first part is for first 400 chapters and second part is for rest of the chapters.
First half of the novel is full of political intrigue, strategical battles and lots of scheming. Our MC is shameless, petty, revengeful, narcissistic flower boy. He is extremely intelligent with no physical power at all.
He becomes son-in-law and helps his wife’s household to go through their difficulties. First half of the novel is all about rising in political ladder and a bit of knowing the world. World is mysterious, with lots of hidden mysteries. THE ONLY THING I HATE ABOUT FIRST HALF IS useless, stupid references. SO MANY REFERENCES!!!! SO MANY REFERENCES!!! SO MANY REFERENCES!!! I mean 35 out of 100 (I.E 35% or less of first half) chapters are only about references.
Second half isn’t that much about politics it is about MC knowing the mysteries of the ancient civilization, their extraordinary inventions, unearthing them and studying them. Using their technology and modern earth technology to create something new. Our MC doesn’t become strong until last 100 chapters of the novel.
The second half of the novel is about mysteries and some sci fi elements are involved. There is a huge twist in the end involving everything that happened throughout the novel. The ending is not bad but it does not do justice to the novel.
In the end novel becomes somewhat of sci fi genre. And If you know little about science then maybe you will find ideas of author little stupid and preposterous. But for me it was in bearable range.
Very poor buildup. Rushed beyond compare and nothing is explained. A totally unreliable NEET MC dies from Weebing too hard apparently, and then becomes reliable, able to kill, smart, and good with girls after he transmigrates. He is the polar opposite of the previous body’s owner, and does multiple things totally out of character. It’s an interesting story design, but the execution is just garbage. I was hooked and spent about an hour or two reading more than I planned, but I kept cringing at the sudden unexplained changes and finally couldn’t handle any more.
Points for the story
None for the design
The narration of this story is so annoying.
It feels like when people read books without voice modulation fitting the content. MC makes friends by asking "do you won't to be my friend". There is more but I just don't feel like reading and commenting since im dropping it.
I would give this story 1* but author is hard working with chapters and is making this novel free so im giving it 3.8*.