Amazing story so far! It hasn't progressed that much(Ch 16 as of now) but I can't wait for the next update! Now you need more power stones and readers then more updates.
great this one
is really interesting really want
this to get picked
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sorry this video is not a problem with the support of the day editor picks up for Facebook today afternoon and evening and I will be a good one i am not sure if u want to be a good one i am not sure if you are free
this is my first webnovel，written in 2008，for Xian Xia，this novel is an origin，it will be adapted into a film that released the trailer a week ago，fantastic(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
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terrible novel lol
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We needed a new book, didn’t get one for like a month and then bam... there are now ten extra books. Can’t really decide on which to choose. However i need exp and this looks like the most interesting so I’m going to write the review you are reading and post it
So far it's a pretty good fan fiction. We just need to hope DJason doesn't either drop it or drop the quality, but from what I've read so far it deserves a five
Well, huhhh...this is my honest opinion for you author.
While reading your plot from chapter 1 till 58 (so far), sometimes I wonder if you forgot that the MC is but a background character. If you want to make the MC as the "second protagonist" please make a step by step growth. I mean, many cases in the story just feels to forced by inserting the MC in order to highlight his existence.
its good.
no need to explain further, read it.
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I can't understand anything, it's probably a novel taken from mtl, totally incoherent and difficult to read. I had been interested in the number of chapters and the purpose of the novel, but anyway, I didn't like it, maybe if you are used to reading in mtl you will like to read
Please make more it seemed ver good from thr three chapters and would very much like to read more I really like the sort so far I also like that you put sasuke I'm mha and that he also has his powers
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