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This book is really good!The writing quality is also good. The way of author's describing is something I also liked. Author should update as many chapters as possible. I highly recommend it!
Nice story. Amazing teacher-disciple dynamic.I love the trope subversion and how the mc is completely different to most novels of similar genres.The story seems amazing and has a lot of potential.The MC's current love interest is also completey unique and never seen before. Their pure relationship cannot be compared with any other know examples.Keep it up King BiBiKAlso if you have time check out my novel RotA and leave a review. Thanks.
i don't get why other reviews are putting this story so high.the MC is OP with the most classic OP power: steal skills from your killshe can deal with monster way stronger than him without much tactics.a few good ideas on how to use his powers but it mostly revolve around "using the OP skill, the big enemy dies. skills gained"on the side of plot and story, it's very plain and serve a harem goal instead of a nice romance. not really what i want to find in a fantasy/adventure novel. Alas it get worse as time pass with lecherous thoughts and gestures appearing past chapter 40. just as the novel become more lewd it also become more dull. the characters losing IQ.i dropped the novel at chapter 50 when the story was boring and i had no more hope for it to get better. The author has also dropped it. good job author.
The novel is good, but it would be better if during the period the phone came in contact with the radiation, the portal and the phone combined, allowing him to enter the other world through the phone portal.Because a smart person can think of why he bought that mansion.
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...........????The story is really interesting, it has lot of potential. Truely looking forward for more......................?????
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It’s amazing ?
They kept this garbage, really??u200d♂️. The books they got rid of was better than this, but you know editors choice and all??................
Just stopping here to give the classic 5 stars that every author gives!This is my first novel about cultivation, video games and systems, but I've had in mind for a long time the idea of this novel and the concepts and mechanics that I'm applying, so you can be sure to read something consistent! Besides, that's all I want to say, enjoy the reading.Also feel free to use the comments on this review to ask questions.
Sounds really interesting from the description and I hope same goes for the novel ??☺☺?????????☺????????????☺?????????☺?????☺?????????????