I let her took a sip first.
"That's alright... That's alright... Rather, I forget what we are talking before." says Romain
"Is that why you guys call me 'your highness'?" I ask.
The man cuts off the both of Donna's wings with both his hands. "That's the ultimate shield wing, it can protect you from anything and everything. It's quite indestructible, that's your secret...Donna." The man says as Donna begins to scream from pain.
"Yeah, I think so. Thanks." I slipped the key into my pockets.
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They stay in the palace and cultivate for 100 years until they all reach the peak of saint realm. The first to break through is Rain, second is Ares, third is Flower, and last is Eve.
umm..is there any romance down the story??
The only problem I find annoying is the mixup of genders . MC is male but becomes she sometimes due to bad translation.otherwise I found this novel to be a good read and liked it very much .
First to set a review for this amazing novel... Yeah!!! Setting that matter aside, this novel shows another story that just doesn't follow the classic and overused genre of many other novels. It's surely unique on its own. Keep writing and upload more chapters, author.
Plot armor from the get go. Contradictory sentence to sentence, paragraph to paragraph. Words become pointless when descriptors are constantly being put in juxtaposition.
Your story is amazing! I love the characters as well. Chris is so unique. I like unique characters, so there's that. You get drawn with the lots of drama too! Continue writing, author!