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Usually, I like to read power fantasies but this is a weak mc disguised as an OP power fantasy mc. He literally has master grade occulmancy but literally EVERONE who is not dumbledore and snape and rando's can read his mind. Like WHY? 1/10
Pretty good, but... you're not consistent. Your description of the main character differs from the psychological portrait of a typical special unit soldier.I recommend some good literature first.
Raw title: 召唤全面战争Status: 102+128+112+74+4 Chapters (Completed -5 Volumes)..............Author: 诸生浮屠Author has many other works including Abyss Domination, Super Floating City.
Great book but u need to work more on character discription such as facial colaur of eyes personality behaviour and can u use different coloured or different brackets for each character so asto make it easy to understand.Also I think you can add more mysterious theme, missions, a setof group of friends ,hidden treasuresFriends to mcand suchFrom -A fan of your workYou can look forward to these series to get an idea for further developmentIn another world with a smart phone.
Shock! The novel is a piece of garbagetransmigration - checkbraindead MC - checkevery girl is jade beauty that instantly falls in love with MC - checkaphrodisiac relationships - checkdropped after 20 chapters - check
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