Copy paste of Worldwide Simulation Era, precise from background, power system, even his first reincarnation disease and solution were the exact same to a T lol.
I read the beginning chapters and the story has some potential but the grammar and sentence structure isn't very good. It's hard to read and doesn't make much sense. I was completely lost when he was describing how he ended up at the gang in the beginning
Look, Im just gonna be honest. Even with reading the auxillary chapter and other reviewers saying that it gets better X chapters later, I cant reccomend this one. The main point of contention with this one is the Mc. Guys seems to be a normal dude who gets isekaied via bike and shoved into a otome game before being essentialy emotionally lobotomized. I understand its because of said system but my honest question was why? Yes, you explained why it happened story-wise, but why was that character shift needed? Was it really neccessary to remove the original personality so early in the story and replace it with whatever Zombie's personality is, if you can call that a complete personality? Does that add anything to the story other then frustration and removing the voice of modern history from the story? If it was Zombie with little bits of the MC poking through every now and then, that would be acceptable.As soon as MC was killed the second time, he essentially just became another,less interesting character. If you had removed the isekai elements from the story and just had him as a basic mob in the original game, there would lose essentially nothing because for a otome game setting, there are almost no Otome game elements.You coul just call it a fantasy world and nobody would notice the diffrence. If it takes 50+ chapters to get somewhat interesting or for some development to happen, and I have to pay for the later part of those chapters, then this novel is not worth it at all. Nobody wants to buy a video game that only gets good 40hrs in. If you want someone to read your book or buy your game, then that 1st impression matters the most, and this book does not make a good one.
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Nice... Am glad to see woman taking the lead. Just the prologue itself, reminds me of the mask of Zorro....this is definitely an interesting read... Fantastic plot... Go Women ?
Although sometimes you feel off by some sentences there is only 1 or 2 per 2-3 chapters so writing quality is one of the highest i ever seen.Story development feels pretty good too without all those constant faceslap ,backstab.Romantic subplot is instead of heavendefying worldshattering G cup thing waisted beaty falling in to mc's hands its just a pretty girl with a tragic backstory, harbouring geniune feelings towards each other.
Story seems ok but the stability of updates is just not there thwy bring privilege then stop updating with not so much a message saying why or anything
To thy fellow readers who stumbled upon this novel. Heed thy warning.A nationalistic tiger, need thy say more?.Read this if thou can hold thou stomach. If not, immediately turn back.Thy headache had still not gotten away after reading this.
You like classic xanxia? You are a fan of immortal beings? You love martial arts? Take this book and start reading now. Everything about it is classic. Story development is good, character is good,world background is good.
Loved it ❤❤❤ Hope fully getting to know you better through your poetry.Keep updating yourself .keep working on your goals ? .aww***wwwww how you have evolved my dear.
It is a well written story.More than 80% of the cultivation novels the I have read, the MC is either retard or an idiot. Provoking powerful people left and right for no reason, and when they lose " I want revenge ?? and yada2, this and that without making any sense" . And have suddenly the ability to defeat people way more powerful than then, and can jump cultivation realms without side effects.I hope this doesn't becomes one of them and please don't dropped the story.
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