Overall i really enjoy it thus far but the only thing I am worried about is the romance and harem genre. Everyone knows that K-pop idols mostly or don’t get involved in romance less a harem so please keep that in mind and dont make the mc get a girlfriend.
A book with good potential.Not too bad pretty good for the author and readers that his english isnt too bad.overall this is a pretty decent book.word of advice for the author take in constructive criticism leave out all the haters.
same story already on pilot read I can create perfect accidentstory had potentialbut it's boring it looks like fan made with putting all clique together
the writing quality is good so far, the translation quality as well. the only issue I have, is that the first chapter is not a real chapter, not even half a chapter. also... only 20 chapters(19, really) for free in trial read? I will use one free fast-pass a day, but that's about it. at least give us 40 chapters to get propperly hooked... as for the low rating: there is almost No world design, as it is reallity so far, so 1* there. updating, also 1* so far, cause no updates. char design is 3*, because at least we have a normal person as the MC. writing quality is 4*, i noticed small Errors here and there, but waaaay less than in most novels. and Story developement i gave 4* because it is relatively fast paced, with decend amount of information about the MC, his sister and a friend. all without filler. so Overall 2.6*
I don't know about everyone else but personaly I like a game novel to be just that, a game novel. Not a conspiracy about your parents death or otherwise. And come on, do you really expect anyone in their right mind to think of the sister as a 19yr old university student, the personality is of a 6yr old.just a young sis cliche.
Honestly I just saw this and thought why not i just didn't expect to find a top notch novel, like this was unexpected. It's simply an incredible novel and I hope to read more.
I had high hopes for this story, but the further I read the more dissapointed I became with the System, the god behind it, and the main character. Not only does the system provide no help, it charges him money at every corner just to nickel and dime him, he’s provided no basic amenities or knowledge to survive in a world extremely unlike our own and is then berated nonstop for understanding nothing.
I am enjoying writing this, I hope you enjoy reading this. :) ---Writing Quality :- Not bad... but also not the best. Stability of Updates :- 2 chapters per day, however, it will go up if the book rank goes upStory Development :- yup, I can say, this is good! it only gets better and better. Character Development :- good. MC will have harem, but not too big nor too small. there is romance too. No annoying characters. No Young Masters. World Background :- This world is unique, I build it and explained everything. it may confuse you a little at start, as long as you read, you will know and understand everything.This story may look slow but... "Slowest is the fastest way" have a good read. I hope you will like... no love it! :)
All I can say is that the MC will have a woman as a wife who has f*cked her father, brothers, grandfathers, countless men and even countless animals. She has been addicted to severe issues of carnal pleasures and admit that she still is. Even so, the story seems to involve her with the MC. I know some people consider the female leads past as NTR. So read at your own risk. Story contains twisted ideals about love.
One of the very few novels I would read until the end wholeheartedly! It would be a lie if I didnt say I didnt cry! Especially the ending. The place this story had in my heart reached number 1. Its not as well written as Revered Insanity or as yearning as Lord of Mysteries, but this story actually made me viewed this characters as true existence. I felt like a proud grandma here cheering on the sidelines! I really really really love the story!
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The character names are sometimes inconsistent (for example, going between Jaden and Jared), the names do not always get translated, the places in the story are clearly mistranslated (for instance, it uses San Diego, San Antonio and Chicago as part of the four provinces of Oprana, while at the same time insisting that an international movie is taking place with the cooperation of Oprana and the USA)... As well as straight up translating yuan as dollars ... In short, the translation is a mess.