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Awesome!!! Loved the book. I love how the perfect mixture of mystery and love occurs. Loved the actions in the book too. I have read the book till the 10th chap so far and seriously I couldn't stop for more. Will complete the rest today or by tom. Good work author
Much to say this is the creator rating his work and i shall say my work does not bring justice to the original work that the HyperRPG crew have created so it would very much be appreciated if you support them on there endeavors and also watch their shows they're hella good
I couldn’t stop reading, and the author gives you just enough to pull you along while leaving you questioning what will happen next. I’m major into bl etc, and the author likes to swing that tantalizing morsel of everyone’s interests in each other right out of reach. Augh. But still painfully worth reading!
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...Shameless Promotion:Check out my novel: Blood Burning Blood. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/blood-burning-blood_19157009606618805
You won't blame me, I hope, I went straight to chapter 60, I prefer the parts where there is action, but you will be happy to know that I was caught in the narration and that I found your story extremely creative!You don't deserve lower than 5 stars and continue like that until chapter 1000!
How fast can you guess these words? 1. BOO_S2. _ _NDOM3.F_ _ K 4. P_N_S5. PU_S_ 6.S_XAnswers: 1. BOOKS 2. RANDOM 3. FORK 4. PANTS 5. PULSE 6. SIX You got it all wrong didn't you? You dirty minded person! NOW GO AND READ THE STORY TO CLEANSE YOUR SOUL!!!
The first chapter is good, and the book has an interesting plot that caught my eye almost immediately. I love how the writer portrays the characters.Kudos to the author!
Nice story after a long time. Want more chapters pleaseee....................
Same copy paste billion times novel. Nothing original....```While others needed several thousand years to cultivate Mythic Level cultivation methods, Clive only needed one year. Earth warriors: “Clive’s cultivation speed is inhuman, why is he able to become the strongest in the world just by casually cultivating for a bit?!” Interstellar cultivators: “Since when did such a supreme, unparalleled prodigy appear in this universe!? It’s only been one year! He had exceeded our cultivation levels by an immeasurable margin!” From then, Clive became the most famous legend of this world.``` *Clive told his secret then. Initially, he found that he had a trace of yellow/Chinese blood. As he kept on upgrading the Chinese bloodline level, cultivation became easier. And when his bloodline became Ancient Chinese, he could cultivate Chinese Qi. This was a mysterious energy far more effective than one available on Earth/in Universe. With it, he was able to cultivate Tao, which later on turned into Dao and ultimately, returned to origin and became essence of Chinese high school textbooks.* Then he was invincible in the universe.
The story itself has quite a bit if potential but the way the author has written this seems just like a puppet show. The characters are like empty wooden shells without any flesh. Normally a character is potrayed with proper descriptions including his appearance, expressions, feelings, body movements,etc. Here, on the other hand, inly shows what the character is doing. Even the background feels like the artificial props on a stage. The style simply doesn't show what kind of world the protagonist has travelled through. In the first few chapters all we get to know is that the other world has a lot if spiritual energy and strong sunlight. Dissapointing in many ways. Wish the author did more justice to the story.?
Hello, here the author: Emm ... well. I just came to say that I will NEVER put NETORARE in my novel, because I hate the 'Netorare' and I can not stand it... that's all.snisudbdbcuducdsicjscew Shit! Not yet!? continue!! jdcjndcshitshithsithsithsithis************hsit
Can you please introduce the world background and the MC background or status 1st, because it's really hard to understand your novel if this novel is modern setting or Eastern fantasy? Or both?
