I've only just started writing, so I can't say too much at this point. But I will speak a bit about my experience with it thus far.At first, I set out to write an apocalypse novel, with a twist of course, but what I stumbled across in this story was more than just that. That's to say, if you come expecting the proper apocalypse novel formula, you will disappointed. It's something entirely different. For now, I will say this; it feels more like a journey with the characters and how they hope to survive this new mysterious world, than it being about their cool powers. I didn't mean to write it this way, but it is what was written.I am trying my best to reveal my world as naturally as possible. There is a lot of depth here, I feel that when I'm writing. But I cannot say more, for fear of overpromising.Perhaps I am just a pretentious newby author, who thinks they've written something 'different'. But, I invite you to have a taste... a full taste. It gets better the deeper in you go.I look forward to meeting all of you... my dear future readers.
I am utterly captivated by your book! It's a literary gem that warrants far more attention than it's currently receiving. The characters are intricately crafted, the plot is expertly woven, and the writing is nothing short of exceptional. It's a travesty that more readers haven't had the pleasure of immersing themselves in your work yet. I'm eager to help you devise a strategy to increase its visibility and garner the accolades it so rightly deserves. Let's collaborate to devise a plan that showcases your masterpiece to the world!"
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15 chapters in:I've gotta say this novel is really well articulated. The fighting! the characters coolness!!! The engagement to the readers!! the story visualization!!! KYAAAA!!!!!ehem, I mean:-Amazing debut so far.-Great usage of words. -Characters are really well written.-World building is very interesting. -Squeaky smooth story pacing.Well, there is only 15 chapters so far, still in itty bitty baby stage. But the potential this story can grow to... BOOM! Huge!10/10 would recommend.
the writing quality is a perfection even the grammar the story was unique including the skills he the main character have even the story development is great looking forward for more chapters
Definitely a very interesting storyline so far and excited to see where the story goes in the future chapters!!
Its highly interesting to see original and unique novels. The author is really good at writing the story which you could see in the novel! Although certain places had huge paragraphs but still I would highly recommend this to everyone!
CONSIDER THIS A SHAMELESS SELF PROMOTION FROM THE AUTHOR. I HOPE YOU WILL ENJOY MY WORK AND THE JOURNEY OF BUILDING CIVILIZATION. PLEASE RATE THE STORY IF YOU ENJOY IT!
This book is quite disappointing i choosed it and thought its about magical beast but all i can see is the story is all about building up the mc's harem and the writing style of this story is quite perverted.
Now, I'm an avid reader of this book and have made my opinion, its AMAZING, I know that if you like character development, some twists, and heartbreak (ow) you'll love this book! I used to read it because I was bored, but now I'm caught up with the chapters and I can't stop. (Also, if you ask nicely or meme hard enough, you might get a character featured after you!)
The story has lots of potential. It started with adrenaline pumping action in chapter 1 and it truly was a great reading experience. I think the choice of 1st POV suits the story well since it's the experience of one person. However, I also think that there is too much introspection (chap2) that some elements already become repetitive. It's also become slowpaced since he had not met anyone yet and still alone for two chapters. Maybe I'm just impatient or I have become one since Chapter1 was quite full of action so the expectation was there. In chapter3 he already met another character and some questions were answered, but only after paragraphs of introspection again. Just a concerned reminder from one author to the next, be careful not to go to the purple prose territory. Also try to eliminate redundancy. All the best author! Keep on writing!
Ok I'm confused is this mc brain dead or he's to arrogant he claims to read novels in his past life but this is the dumbest he's been I mean what mc have acted like this well his personality needs a little work I mean he has two lighting in him but I don't remember a system or artifact a artifact would be a good twist well thank you for for the good work