This is a good story. After completion of the original story, this gives the reader something to look forward for more. Awaiting for more update.
Your book was really good; it provided detailed descriptions that allowed me to imagine the scenes in your story. I also appreciated your clear writing style, which helped me to understand the plot. Overall, it was a great read, although I found the name of the main character a bit long. By the way, I particularly enjoyed the way you described Shiroha in one of the chapters. Your description was so vivid that I felt like I could already picture her appearance
I don't know why suddenly this novel is gathering haters. This novel consists of normal cliche scenarios of gaining system, invading of other worlds but the way author presents it is pretty good. There are no arrogant young masters except one or 2 martial artists who are jealous of MC. There is no romance yet till chap 366 and i guess author will keep it that way. MC has to struggle initially to get resources by fighting in other world but as he gets stronger everything becomes easy. Fights are interesting but they don't drag for many chapters. Translation is mediocre. But this story is worth a try. Many reviews are just baseless, only to get exp as they haven't even read 50 chapters
Bruh stop fking putting this kind there are already 10 of them ffs????????????????????????????????????????????
An interesting concept, I love the way you tell this book in 3rd person pov, but I sometimes lose track of some of the characters' conversations and thoughts, I had to read it about twice to make sure it was whose sentence or whose thought.
It's just monster Paradise mixed with super gene only worse... Besides why take up a novel which the author is on hiatus!? Pretty dumb, like always web novel y'all have other novels to update (dark King) but still wasting time with this BS
Big sis..it is just starting..Heheeeh????????????????????????????????????????????????????????bring it on author???we will see whether I can hold on while reading your chapter
good story! but it doesn’t update ofton unfortunately which is why I have to put 3 stars for updating stability but the the rest of the story is top tier recommend!?
This one is a banger. I can relate to the MC on a spiritual level. The writing style is concrete and well-formed. It flows well and is very entertaining to read. Highly recommended for fellow men of culture! I shall now return to binging this great novel.
Don't has much chapters but actually is interesting, now(chap 12) is like a cultivating and school like history but probably something happen soon. I'm waiting for more, I don't usually read novels in this style but wish that continue be good and reik be with you :p Sorry about any English mistake, I am learning.
dude i am telling you if you continue this novel it will reach the top seriously there are a lot of gangster related novels but small amount of them are this satisfying. of this works out this novel can be turned into a webtoon . plz don't drop it as i am very picky about novels there are a small bunch of them that i have liked so far. so good job.
Like all bodyguard genre novels, MC is lousy at bodyguarding waifus (2 digits worth of waifus gone comatose or kidnapped, gone missing MIA, got butchered into multiple bodyparts or soul dissipated.)MC is still virgin despite 7,000+ chapters and double digits waifu harem. As for the villains, MC doesn't get to kill them because of lame reasons (too lame to mention) and these villains (hundreds of them and counting) survive to join the Main Villain's not-so-secret organization (currently operated by Main Villain's waifu). Main Villain is currently trapped with MC's mentor and MC's ancestors/surviving family in the 4th dimension (hello physics?) in an eternal combat standoff.MC is schizo and inconsistent, doesn't have consistent stance against villains. MC doesn't kill the villains that should be killed because he's afraid of offending the villain's upper tier bosses who will in turn take revenge against his waifus, but said villains does bad stuff to his waifus anyway.MC decides to kill villains but ends up failing or triggering a massive backlash that hurts his waifus anyways.MC (or rather Author) has a gigantic ego because he spends like 100 words every chapter monologuing that he's superior to the villains (Author has Self-fulfillment issues).Author rewards MC for making the worst choices.Author causes too many plotholes and retcons stuff along the way.Dumb and Dumber. MC is dumb but villains are even dumber.Author resorts to depowering/resetting MC's cultivation progress to milk/spam chapters:01. MC reached a level where fights became boring and repetitive and author decided to take action to save his "falling ratings".02. So author came up with an idea to destroy MC's physical body in the lamest way possible while he was out astral projecting his Spiritual Form to complete a "not-so-important errand". You could say that MC deserved it because he left his physical body to an untrustworthy waifu-wannabe and her even more conniving family members.03. Thus causing MC's lifespan to start ticking down like a time bomb,as he is forced to use expend his remaining Spiritual Energy as fuel in the most masochistic way (author has to tell readers that is masochistic) to enact his revenge against his current list of never-ending enemies, preying on his new-waifus.04. With each use of Spiritual Energy, the stability of his Spiritual Form degrades and his cultivation level ends up dropping as well. 05. Author resorts to wasting 100-200 words to reiterate the fact that MC is running on borrowed-time every chapter from then on. 06. As if that wasn't enough, author teleports MC to a region where there is a total absence of divine chi/qi, so that MC can't replenish his Spiritual Energy and his lifespan degrades even faster.07. And after a few hundred chapters later, when MC finally reforms his physical body back (lame deus ex machina), MC gets resetted back to the 1st level of Cultivation.08. Because of the total absence of divine chi/qi, all of MC's former cultivation methods are rendered useless but MC has to recultivate from scratch.09. Author then makes MC spend 100-300 words on MC boasting (or whining) on about the past of how powerful he was in the past every chapter, without fail.10. Unfortunately, no matter how author tries to sell the creative "new combat moves" and "new cultivation methods" invented by MC with the absence of absence of divine chi/qi. It's just a lazy cut-and-paste and rehash of what author did a few thousands chapters ago. (Just replace the words "taking in divine chi/qi through the meridians" with "direct intake of the physical elemental essence into the flesh and bones")