10/10 would doctor again, i think its pretty good novel, to read, its a modern novel, a system one and not a cultivation one, not sure if it will be a chinese medicine one or not
okay maybe am i wrong to say that you might be going off-track because do the women really have to be shown off to the world you could consider this but you really a great writer indeed
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Wow I just started reading this today & its really good. I am surprised how Jun Min & Jun Hua are so likeable as 2 different characters as one person. The story is fast paced. It's well written with some grammar issues but not bad enough to distract from the story. Sometimes the author gives us a bit of confusion with mysterious conversations but it gets cleared up later on. However why does the author keep mentioning that the MC is really beautiful even when she wear a veil. The public hasn't seen her face without the veil but they all assumed she is beautiful. Also I am assuming the ML is Shouji who has sharp eyes and can tell a guy dressing as a girl but not the reverse ? Hmmm.....what with that problem? Still it's a great story can't wait for some romance to happen.
The story itself is pretty good. There are some obvious situations very similar to other novels but it has quite a lot of potential in my opinion.There would be 2 things which would need improvement though for me. The first is grammar since you have gone premium you really need to get a proofreader for your chapters especially the earlier free ones since they will get you readers.The 2nd is more of a writing improvement, because you have it sometimes that the execution of the reaction to a scene seems to be more of a narrating instead of showing. This makes it seem quite bland in comparison to your build up which is very good. I like how you build up the *******, if you make the conclusion more of a showing the expressions or changing to the viewpoint of fans or other people it would make it more immersive.I know that the author is quite new to writing and i see some improvements till now which makes me believe that it will become better and better.Therefore i would definitely recommend this novel to everyone esoecially to us which liked top management or i really am a superstar but were disappointed with the big flaws in IRAS and the discontinue of TM.
5/5 novel and the only one good from that author. Not much face smack tho, most of annoying MC enemies been killed by other people. So called friends (except first friends) keep using him. It's not a harem but author wrote in notes that you can imagine harem end. In NU reviews you can see OMG PRINCESS FAMILY against MC. Actually no. It's all because "5 names". This novel way better than battle frenzy and others novel from author, I even suspect that it not his novel.
I like it. one of my favourite sports novel. Keep it up.
i haven't even read the story yet but just by the synopsis I can tell it's going to be promising, the tags are intriguing as well hope the author doesn't drop it.
Man, let me tell you something man, let me tell you something man! Snoozy is a phenomenal writer! This is his first book so some people didn’t like the beginning by the way he has grown and progressed with his story telling and world building, they way the Ed our MC has developed its simply mind blowing! There is development of the Ed’s character, mentality and ambition; as well as his powers. The research done into other cultures as well with the combination of western and eastern concepts along with the authors own ideas, they form this expertly crafted story! I don’t want to spoil anything but all I can say is our MC has neutral mindset maybe chaotic neutral mean he will help others but he also will see through his goals and ambitions if it means ignoring someone’s plight, using others or putting himself in harms way. Ed is really OP he’s above average at best where we stand but he’s unmatched in his ability to plot and see plans coming to fruition. The best thing you can do is add this to your library and just read it yourself, don’t take my opinion on anything other than stick through the beginning as this was his first work! He has another book as well that people love I haven’t read it yet but I will, even with it being on hiatus and him wanting to rework it, because he is just that good at drawing you In and i would love to see how he developed with that one as well as when he reworks it how he mad it that much better. I guess I kinda review both but he is great and the story is great! You still reading this? Why?! You should be reading the story at this point! Can’t Wait to see you in the comments of the newer chapter leave me reply to my comments and let me know if I got you started lol
This is a really good book to read, it leaves you wanting to know what is going to happen next, the character development is laid out well. the only thing I'm not a fan of is the apocalypse thing because its lightly talked about and it should be a parallel world not apocalypse, but I'm only at chapter 93 so I guess we will see.
Its a very good story, interesting.
a good book