This is to make sure that nobody get hurt, if Jennifer's [Telekinesis] force were leaking subconsciously.
After careful consideration, and reviewing every on of the 100+ web novel I’ve read until this point, I have to call this my favorite novel of all time. The characters have actual personality. The power system is well defined enough for reference, but he entire plot revolves more around personal growth than strength. The main character is interesting, real, and flawed enough to feel like a real, relatable person. However, the supporting characters are all equally fleshed out and interesting.The story is filled with amazing plot twists, but none of them are forced or unessisary. And most of all, the story flips between actions being perceived as important, to being seen as stupid, back to being seen as genius. The world building is the best I’ve ever seen, and it’s populated with the best characters I’ve ever read. On top of that, the conflict and goals are well defined and consistent.I rarely rate novels, but this story is too good for its current low popularity on here. Read it!
Some place grammar is there but i like this content $$$
I like this novel. Well, author keep it up. You can use Grammarly to improve your grammer. I like how he can increase the status of his students. Well, hope you don't make his students to op.
the quality in the writing is top notch maybe even a littel to good. but this story is more of a retelling of fate and diffret myths in fate. there is no story just fancy word to describe the bare minium
The Author committed to a daily dual release and has long since upheld that promise.This book was recommended to me by a friend and i gotta say, i read it with trepidation at first, but then after not being able to put it down and calling in sick as a result of staying up all night reading it, i can honestly say i'd recommend this on to others well.
An absolute masterpiece! The characters are richly developed, and the plot twists kept me on the edge of my seat. The author's prose is beautifully crafted, making it impossible to put the book down. Highly recommend!
An exhilarating journey through darkness and intrigue, this vampire thriller masterfully blends supernatural elements with suspense. The protagonist's hidden powers and rich world-building keep readers hooked. A must-read for fans of gripping, adventurous tales
The author made me realize that wasting your life is a sin. I will go digest that.
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This is my honest opinion after reading few chapters. The concept is good. Not the best but surely good because of the pair ~ Ashton and Matt. The conversations are funny between them and one can enjoy while reading. Parallelly, the author also tries to induce the world details in between and the character's growth too as the chapters proceeds.The author has a nice way to show interactions. They are flowy, engaging, and are filled with enough humor.Overall, it was a nice read.Cons (According to me): I couldn't read the synopsis. It was preventing me from reading your work. A synopsis must contain vital details and should be very intriguing cause this is the deciding factor that will make readers whether they want to read or not. And, when I saw the synopsis, I almost dropped your work.Secondly, grammatical errors. I found many of them. I can ignore the punctuations but errors in grammar are a bit too much. So, those need to be fixed.Keep up the good work!!This work has potential. You just need to fix some things and you are good to go.
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