This Novel is a gem, especially for gamers who like to be a support character. Or a healer.And this suit me very well, since i ALWAYS pick non combatants class, but not a crafter too.This is a slice of life story about a genius musician who love wholeheartedly to music and the instruments, but not naive. They wonder the game world to spread joy and sorrow with music as their medium to tell their story straight to listener heart.That's all about it. Since i don't want to spoil the story plot.This story ain't perfectly written, and maybe not your fav, especially to chunnin reader. Since MC is a pacifist. But, being a pacifist isn't mean a cowardice. As Corporal Desmond T Doss from US prove it in WW2.
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An amazing novel with top quality content and consistent chapters, I think the novel has some unique and intriguing ideas. Overall I think the novel is Great and I hope the author continues with this Book.
it's just dumb , unless you are a retard or shut down your iq and reasoning there's no way you can enjoy reading this it's written by a super amateur writer ,full of plot holes
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~This is not really a review, but eh..~Hey there you lovely readers, author TSETH here.If you're a new reader of my novel I just wanted to say welcome!!From some of the chapters in the novel, you guys could probably tell that this book has already been published before, so yeah, this is a new account that was created, and why this happened is explained in chapter 28 so read till there to find out.The previous account was closing in at 100,000 views so it's kind of a bummer to have to start over from scratch, but hey! since my old lovely readers enjoyed the novel that much in the past, I'm sure you guys will love it. I think those numbers can easily be reached again and then be surpassed with the help of you lovely new readers.So what are you lovely readers waiting for? Go and read my novel!! Go and read your novel!! Go and read our novel!!~waves gb~
I only rating this as FIVE STAR because....No Golden Trio being formed.The other fanfic Harry Potter and the Prince of Shadow were truly the most nerve wracking pain the a*s fanfic I've ever read on this site.So much bundled of hate I gathered to that wretched fictional character Ron.Seriously the author is ludicrous in giving more attention to that guy from OC's view like there's no tomorrow.So I dropped it and since then only reading Harry Potter fanfic that is worth without that despicable weasel.P.S. I despised Rowling for pairing Hermione to that redheaded idiot.
It follows other stories but ok to read. ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I'm not even going to pretend I didn't laugh out loud at some of these animal lines. The sparrow: 'Chirp chirp! Your human ATM is about to come online~' — this bird has more personality than half the side characters in this book and I am here for it. The husky: 'I am definitely my owner's biological son! He buries bones, and I bury bones — that's heredity!' and then the squirrel immediately correcting it: 'Stupid dog, your owner is burying a BODY!' This exchange is genuinely funny AND it delivers a massive plot reveal. The author is using animal dialogue to do double duty — comedy and exposition at the same time. That's skilled writing. Su Zhisheng himself has a great voice. His line 'I think he just lost control of the dosage since it's been so long since he last touched a mango. He tried to harm me but nearly ended up killing himself instead. Honestly, I find it hilarious.' — said with a smile while his accusers are losing their minds. That's cold. That's calculated. That's a protagonist who has already processed the fact that these people are not his family and is operating purely on self-interest now. The stepmother's message is also brilliantly written: 'Sure, Zhang Weilong plays around a bit, but what man doesn't stray?' This is such a realistic toxic-parent line — the casual normalization of infidelity, the assumption that Su Zhisheng will just accept whatever is handed to him. And Su Zhisheng's response? '…' Two dots. That silence says everything. The narrative voice itself is sharp and slightly irreverent. It doesn't take itself too seriously but it also doesn't dumb down the stakes. When the squirrel says 'Why make a little pinecone toy look so realistic' — the indignation in that line is so perfectly captured.
Hello, Web Novel site, I am Mack Samson. I run a new blog called Weeb Revues that covers Japanese light novels and such. This review of War Grounds was requested by the author, SilentMild, on Facebook. I am going to give my first impressions of the web novel; 35 chapters at this time.The premise of war grounds is a very strange twist to the usual MMO/isekai light novel. Our American(?) main character, Al Gentrix, has gotten his booty kicked on the VR battle royale game, War Grounds, due to it having a toxic playerbase that you'd expect from most MMOs. When he's just about to throw in the towel, he's told of an app called SARS that's supposed to help. Al installs it... and it basically turns Al into Kirito from SAO.SARS grants Al an OP hidden class right out of the gate, and is able to take control of Al's character through autopilot. However, the major drawback to this is that Al's mind could get damaged from long periods of rapid inputs. SARS is also able to hack War Grounds' database and find all kinds of information, but it can only scan one area of the game at a time.Al is a very greedy person. He literally plays War Grounds like a NEET as a coping mechanism for his father's death. This does lead to some spats with his mom, as you can expect. However, this aspect of Al's character doesn't get explored too much, at least not thus far. But hey, I don't mind because I just want to see MMO adventures. My fav, however, is SARS. He's a good boy, or rather, a good bot. If you love GlAdOs (is that how you spell it?) from Portal or AIDAN from The Illuminae Files, you'll love SARS. He's got some great deadpan sass that makes reading this web novel a pleasure. Other characters include Al's IRL friends Nisha and Sophie, who are also players in War Grounds (won't spoil who their avatars are, though). Al also befriends an orc named Papa Bear, but he seems to be kind of like that brash and annoying guy. The biggest appeal ends up being the story and world. War Grounds has a lot of thought put into as far as game modes and mechanics. It does get repetitive as the author lists every single game asset with its description every single time, however I don't mind because it accurately reflects how it would look in the game. Imagine if you were playing a complex JRPG and it only told you what stuff did after your first time seeing it! The ******* and momentum for action is also good. The only issue is that it's a bit skeletal. All the basic ideas are great, but there could be some more substance. I'm also a sucker for books written in the traditional format, as opposed to the one-line paragraph style that's also used in Reincarnated as a Sword.~~~~~~Verdict: 8/10War Grounds is great so far. The story is more than sufficiently entertaining, it just needs some flesh. Writing is damn hard to do well, but writing the skeleton is quite possibly the hardest part. War Grounds is a great story from SilentMild!
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