i would want to know more about he foes and the history of the story like the war and if the other dragon lords are under antagonist
Nice novel. As the author's first novel, it is awesome. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
a refreshing story, fast development. it's too bad still have a classic lazy writer with MC don't have any family. Don't you writer have at least a mother ?
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Enjoyable read, seems like a tower climbing at first but so far doesn't seem like the case. After reading the first 3 arcs, I felt the story so far was a prologue. A large chunk was dedicated to the trial/entry to the tower per se. The overall story felt like it progressed slowly overall but the pace and action within the trial made it seem fast paced. The fighting scenes were well done and didn't feel repetitive. I liked how the MC was not always the strongest nor smartest one within the group. Other members are capable of making their own actions and pulling their own weight helping each other. Not being always dependent on the MC is rare. Though the 3rd arc MC took the reins.The characters are nice and they have their own quirks. They mesh well together. Though you still have some of your stereotypical characters. Some thing I disliked is that it felt repetitive that someone is knocked unconscious or captured and needed someone to save them. Characters got separated a lot in the trial so there was a lot of pov changes not bad at all. Additionally, there are a lot of named characters most might not get enough development. Lastly, a lack of deaths. There was always danger lurking around but nobody ever dies.
Title is just ٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و ╮ (￣ 3￣) ╭ alluring and stuff. Harem sounds good but I think it can improve but I’m not a professional so yeah~~~~~~~~~~ why did you stop writing completely??
Nice start. Perhaps we have the same interests. However, I hope yours wouldn't be satirical, pessimistic and sarcastic as mine (intentional on my part). So far I have yet to see a deeper characterization in your novel, although I am asking too much for a novel that just started. I wonder how this novel would distinguish itself from mine. Good luck and more power to your novel! ?
Just started reading and already hooked! Makes me feel connected to it and makes me want to dive deeper into the story! I really like it and can't wait till more chapters. Keep it up!
This novel is amazing after the character development. As during the character development, the main character is a idiot that does very dumb stuff like destroying your beginner village due to anger. The beginning of the story, make you want to kill the MC due to his lack of knowledge even though he had 10 years of experience in that game. Even if he gained only some of that knowledge that should be at least 5% to 50% of his previous experience. But he still did retard stuff that got him rekted in the beginning of the story. After the beginning, the novel get interesting as this become a novel about a world inside a world inside a virtual reality game world inside a world. Basically this novel is a world inception. I believe this novel would be one of a kind novel as long as the novel continued to improve and developed. This novel will fail, if the author all of a sudden had the knowledge of a kid because the novel them have horrible grammar and updates. As kids usually are random and have bad grammar.
The mc is extremely stupid guy who survives only because of plot armor.Never fight seriously.Trying to not hurt his enemies.And to learn a little he needs near death experiences his or his girls. (By the way he's denser than Japan protagonists)Simply put he disappointing you again and again.I read a few chapters more in hopes it goes better.
i am so amazed by the storyline, really caught my attention. i would literally recommend this to each and every person! you should definitely keep on updating it!!!! Good job author. ? ? ?
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