The plot seems new and different from already available cultivation ones.If you build the world correctly it has the potential to be a hit. All the Best !!!
KiBiBiK's review series:One sentence review: A pretty interesting cheat power that gets ruined through boring repetition of the plot as well as uninteresting and unrelatable characters (And also boring and fake dialogues).Detailed review: An interesting cheat power that has tremendous potential in terms of treasure hunting. I had great hopes for the future but the story clearly showed its level of less than mediocrity from the beginning itself. I could think of tens of scenes and uses of this power straight out of my mind in a couple of seconds but the author decided to stick with 'storage' gambling. Just that. Repeat that. Repeat that. Repeat that.Did n't you get annoyed? Exactly that's my problem here. 60+ chapters done and the author is cycling the same thing again and again. And let me tell you, this thing is new and but not the coolest. (I believe 130+ is still the same thing)Is there a hook that makes you read the novel? NOIs there an interesting character or MC that makes you continue reading? NO. (Some might like the characters- but I find them dull)Another big problem is the unnecessary racial discrimination and slurs used. Just freaking unneeded. "Yellow" this. "Yellow" that. Seriously. You could do better.Logic: Somewhat works somewhere. But I find big loopholes everywhere in terms of modern legal system as well as personality. A foreign student who got enrolled in a 'Fake' university will be in the process of DEPORTATION. But the MC can do whatever he wants. Maybe, the author will touch that up later? who knows?It is illegal to work or earn money for someone with a Student Visa. This guy is making money and then publicizing it.Let's forget this assuming he is a US citizen or permanent resident. But he is clearly not American. A stranger who he just met is willing to invest money trusting him without questions? And even gives 60-40 share? Seriously? What year is this?Characters are too loud and dull. "Hey Buddy" hundred times. The usage of God in this novel is HORRIBLE and annoying. You are Cheating for God's sake and still say God loves me. Too lazy to write anything else..YawnI read this much leaving my brain locked up. Good luck.You might like it.ProsA unique modern settingAn interesting cheat powerConsAll the sentences above
Didn't expect him to really become a villain and not a hero who became a villain by saying they're misunderstood and giving excuses like the world isn't black and white. However, his sect principles are really dumb.
Good novel, but a Trash Translator. this is actually one of the best novels I've read on here this month and it would have defiantly gotten a 5 star review from me even if it didn't meet the 20 free chapter quota. I think the main reason Myself and others Reviewed this so badly is the translator, This novel has great grammar but there are multiple repeat chapters after around chapter 12.If the translator goes back and deletes the repeats and corrects the chapter name order I'll go and change my review to 5 stars.
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I love this story and honestly wish there were more like it. I like how the MC is good and yet bad all at once, and how he at first he is selfish and only cares about himself but over time he learns to care for others. Honestly there is no real way to do justice for this novel, but it is the best novel there is.
Wow! I have always loved fantasy and I think this is the best so far. Nice storyline
gramnar and name changes shortly into the book was awful.
A deadbeat story with a good-for-nothing plot!
When will there be a new update?
perfect story and nothing missing from beginning to end
WHAT A WASTE!!!