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I thought it was going to be a good book but after reading the fist 40 chapters you can tell the author is a novice. The translations are wrong in a lot of spots, some are just copy pasts of the raw still in the native language. The story seems to be pushed forward way to fast. In places that could be really good battles or good scenes are just ended in one sentence being incredibly anticlimactic. There is not a lot of time spent to develop the characters or the world l, just basic info you can get from the book description. A lot of details are forgotten about or just skipped over and completely forgotten. Definitely won't be paying the rip off prices of this app to read more.
the depth of thought that went into the world building is amazing. many have tried to tie a game world to the real one, but this takes it to a beautiful level. there is a solid reason the game world is so realistic and the struggle feels as heavy as it should to make the revelations really shocking. the pace can feel long but the payoff is worth it and the relationships are reflective of that. kudos to this story and wish I could blast it with gifts!
I loved this novel so much! The characters were amazing. The plot was amazing. The world building was amazing. But it just stopped all of a sudden no announcement, nothing. I wish it would comeback!
Hello everyone. I'm ryan the translator of the novel :) so as you guys may known TWO will be dual hosted on both gt and on QI. The release rate would be currently 14chaps/week. Hope you all enjoy the novel. If you have any questions feel free to join our discord or just chill around and have a chat there. Thank you all for your support :)
thanks for the book . good story good finish
No matter how flawed and dumb he is to be a paragon he must've been pretty old right since his current progress is due to literal hax. Not only that but with age comes maturity so add 17 years to that. He's still way too dumb and immature considering the facts. Shouldn't have made him a reincarnated to begin with, the novel isn't horribly had but it lacks a certain umph. Unlike other major novels I feel no weight at all to his breakthroughs and the cultivation realms. Dropping this after all. At most he's merely a character that acts his physical age for once instead of a 12 year old with mental issues like the other cliches reincarnated mcs. The problems just keep piling up after a point. There's no excitement either. I found myself skipping and speed reading chapters as they were too boring or just simply couldn't hook me at all. Kind of interesting premise but it was poorly executed.
I really liked this one, at first the MC was kinda generic to me but soon I got hooked when they brought the girl he calls "Tool Man #1" into play.This idea of a untalent MC seeking help from a more talanted person with his system is quite novel to me, usually the MC hoards the benefits all to himself, here it's different though.Later when more girls are brought in things get even more interesting, following multiple POVs is really interesting, the many adventures they each go through is way more fun to read than many novels coming out these days.The best to me is the fact that none of them is invencible, none of them is gonna solo their respetive "runs" and that's really refreshing in a system novel. Each girl does fail and dies many times, but they improve on the next run and go further beyond. The whole thing feels kinda like a "rogue-like" type of game, death in these simulations is expected, the trick is to use what you learned in the previous run to go further in this one, eventually passing through certain events with a "perfect run".All in all, really liked the novel. Having read the RAWs I can say the novel doesn't disapoint as it progress, I recomend this one to all that have some time to spend.
A somewhat dull read. There's a chance that this novel might have an overarching plot or story but for now the first 19 chapters are vague descriptions of the power system, more specifically the sword qi in the protagonist. Every sword is just a qi producing machine? What does the sword qi do? Is it just a consumable that maybe tempers him every now and then? How does he fair against a cultivator? What's he going to do with the ridiculous (and growing) amount of cultivation techniques in his head?This is entire novel feels like I'm reading an uninteresting storylike infodump. Good translation quality but I can't be bothered. 2.5/5.
Bruh. Literally the author goddamn throws it straight at you no description at all just straight up throws a scene immediately at the first chapter. We all know that the mc will be talented but this though. I was expecting a sword path novel like Dominating Sword Immortal but thats just wishful thinking I guess. The rival is a 16 year old thats already past the Qi Condensation Realm and she's as strong as maybe Mid Reality Condensation or whatever the **** that 2nd realm is from DSI. Total horse **** as we'd know that the first places are always some backwater villages or some **** and not the capital so this is way too overbounds and also the pavilions and **** aint even ranked dude just described wtf this **** sucks dick bro
haven't read it, i only know because in my notification it's trending but, when i see it's views and support is not the best i hesitate to read it because it's probably not going to get picked
This is Story that provides a fresh perspective of a fish out of water. I like the MC, he’s built with a mysterious past and I hope that get’s explained. But right now the story is still in its early stages and I hope how to see it Dedevelop.