A fun story whose premise reminds me of the great anime of the 90s like Starship Girl Yohko Yamamoto but with the flair and tropes of the 2010s! An excellent and fresh novel! I look forward to more.
Author I had a lot of expectations before reading this novel but after reading I was greatly disappointed ..in kingdom building novel where you said that he is not a usual MC with all goody personality but still he treats his subordinates as friends take oath to protect everyone ...how is this even possible and subjects such as elven girls Don't even fully respect him....are you kidding me if his subordinates don't even respect him fully and the MC don't let them kneel to pledge loyalty since he take them as his friend from get go are you kidding really and yeah can you add R-18 please we want ***** scenes too it's a main element in cases of empire and all after all kings takes many concubines and all so make it practical please
Intriguing start!
M already curious about the 'youngster' and his background. Writing style is really smooth and easy to understand. Though never read this genre but I feel like I would like it!
U go Urgi! Fighting!
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I like the way you write it, easy to understand and simple. After the first chapter, i realised I turn the page already. Who was that person on the MC's dream? anyway, Keep writing :))
Despite only having read 20 chapters I quite like this types of novels. Tbh, due the title this would be a harem but it seems I was quite wrong. Entirely.
This is just your nice slice-of-life novel where you see the adorable interactions of the mc and the FL.
Of course if that was all I don't think this would be magical realism because the FL is quite mysterious. She can know things of the mc that he didn't told her.
It's like predicting fate? Maybe something similar to that. Try it, probably one of the better novels this trial read if you like slice of life.
Oh also, the only thing I dislike is that the mc likes carrot juice, you read it right. Carrot juice, that sh*t exists?!
Translation quality: 5* (Smoothly~~~~)
SoU: 5* (Trial read)
Story Development: 4* (It's honestly good, there's even some foreshadowing of something mysterious.)
Character Design: 5* (The FL is cute, the mc is a bit sad but relatable I guess)
World background: 3* (Same as our world but probably also different due the mysteriousness or not and everything was a hoax)
Overall score: 4.4
Personal score: 4.5
The story is very good and nice story ❤
It just needs improvement and time
And you need encouragement also
Would looking forward to read more of your books
Please if you search for a book called ( Big dream master) on webnovel the book also needs encouragement and reviews thanks
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Although this book is still just short. It's got potential. I've read the first few chapters and had a good laugh while I'm at it. I will watch this book's growth with great interest.
Congrats on your second book, author-san!
I like the idea behind the story, but the writing quality is just too bad for me to enjoy it. The way it's written also seems kinda forced which ruins the plot quit a bit. I think if the author got someone to help edit the story it could be way better than it is right now.
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