Author here, hence the shameless 5 star rating.
Quick disclaimer like many of the other authors out there, this is my first novel. Please be gentle ;). But in all seriousness, I'm here to improve on my writing and hopefully bring you some joy with what I'm attempting the produce with this novel.
Please feel free to leave as many comments, criticisms, and suggestions as you'd like. I take these very seriously and hope to grow along the way.
Hey guys I would shamelessly put a 5 star review simply to make my own novel look good. But in all my novel is still bad at the beginning.
This novel is the proof that I am improving with each chapter I wrote so I can't bear to edit all the old chapters. I hope you all won't mind.
Stay with this novel and watch as the author and the novel improve together !! Thanks!
Yes! I gave it five stars! If you have read what I read, you would too. The name got me first, then the synopsis then the chapter. Gosh, I was hooked despite it being my first time reading this genre. Warning beforehand, the Santa we see at first is really annoying(I nearly strangled him several times) but it gets better if you just wait for it! I am definitely going to read more of this! Mage, you have impressed me!
What a fun story! Ron is such a fun character that I always find myself laughing whenever I read a new update. I just wish the updates can come faster.
Bom eu darei uma Review sincera sobre o capítulo um que não ficou bom porém eu me esforcei para fazer os outro e além que seria injusto eu botar tudo cinco estrelas
All I Have To Say Is That This is Actually...DogSh*t Like What Is This He Could Become The Most Poweful Being In Just A Few Days But This Author Actually Put In So Many Unnecessary Obstacles And This Is The Most Sorriest Excuse of An Comedy...Like It Didn’t Even Make Me Smile It Actually Made Me Angry....Chinese Comedy Is Garbage Like The Person Who Made This Is Either A Little Kid Who Thinks Hes Funny Or An Old Man Whos Been Out Of Touch With Society For Like A 1000 Years... (IDK Why I Put That GIF There So Dont Ask)
I am the author of this novel, so of course I am biased to myself.
Welcome to my book!
I thank everyone for reading my work, even if you don't like it.
I have read a LOT of webnovels, many of them translated from chinese. I have seen a lot of commonly used tropes, and as a change of pace, I wanted to create something different.
There will be nearly no "Young Masters". Only a very select few. (The absence of at least one idiot is just as bad as overfilling)
There will be no "I must save (the Honor of) my Family!"
There will be no "Heaven sent lucky chances". Heaven controls luck, and Heaven does not like the MC, at all.
I also want to show a real change in Gravis' personality as time goes by. He won't always be a wimp. He won't always be a cold-hearted killing machine. Just as emotions change, people change with them.
This is a lot to live up to, but I'll do my best.
Updates will be 2 chapters per day.
I have a backlog, so updates will be constant.
Thank you all for reading!
ok i'm liking it so far, but god damn is it annoying reading how obsessed das is with elena. like, he saw her die in a video game and he felt like his soul was ripped out? give me a break man. one of my biggest pet peeves in novels are overly emotional and romantically obsessed protagonists.
While the power he has through his game seems good, it is destroyed by this novel. This novel is basically DBZ. Almost the entire novel at this point is spent on one fight. It was almost 20 chapters! It should've been just one! Very disappointing. This novel isn't even about the power to raise actresses. It's about a fight with an arrogant young master.
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Yah a farmer is fearsome. Think about it if they leave your kingdom and no-one else knows how to farm it would be a serious issue for any kingdom.
I can't say too much. stability of uptades is good.like 2 chapter a day.
World background so far is good. i liked the story about the tree.
I don't know the author will continue stability of uptade but you can try it is good novel.