NathanCole3387
Hello fellow webnovlers, shameless author here with a shameless five star review on his own bookJust wanted to say I'm looking forward to read what your thoughts about this story are either by reading your comments on the chapters or by posting you reviews here as it would really help me improve my ideas and the writing quality for future stories Hope you enjoy my book and have a nice day
I think it's cool you took inspiration from Vampire System, but you made it way way too similar my dude. I'd suggest reworking from the beginning.
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Everything is pretty good but too many of clichés and reused themes, that makes it somewhat dull. Otherwise its a good read if someone is new to webnovel.
El autor es tonto o que?, Se supone que el MC se quiere volver fuerte rápido para no sufrir peligro ni debilidad, pero no mata bestias fuertes para no subir de nivel, hay que tener consistencia en lo que se dice. Un libro así pierde el sentido y ya no es tan interesante.
How does this novel irritate me? MC is stupid and slow. He is hailed as a genius but does not use his skills in battle. An overrated novel. He doesn't level up after getting the Mythic Helmet, but is a waste of time. I don't understand why there are so many positive reviews. The novel is extremely long. for a drop of the plot, a whole sea of useless information.
I havent started resding but from the description It sounds intresting. But I saw One comment mentioning something about the mc being gay. Sorry but I dont really like gay mcs, so can someone tell me if mc gay or not?
TL:DR, Just another chinese cultivation trash that may or may not be worth your time.
I love sc-fi and this series is great for bothe people just getting into the genre and those who have loved it for years. Great job to author for the Grammer, and pacing of the story. Highly Recommend, keep up the great work.
Definitely worth reading!It's a fast-paced but enjoyable story about a world where 'dungeon-monoliths' allow people to enter them, kill monsters & beasts, and collect skill, etc. to get stronger and 'level-up'Its fairly classic, but stories like this one made me so addicted to webnovels! :)The mc might come off as slightly 'foolish' at the beginning, but only because he has no real clue about what is going on exactly. Sure, he did some research, but the right information is expensive - and only VIP can afford that. Anway, it's a good story with good grammar, etc. and an enjoyable read for everyone who is into such stories. I binged it in a single night and I don't regret it in the slightest.Keep up the good work & thanks for sharing the story!
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Wow, this novel got dropped from trial read list pretty fast despite the support, while a certain other novel about a baron or something gets picked even faster without much of a support.
