I thoroughly enjoyed this story until the last 20 or so chapters when the story goes out of loop and became disinteresting. I still enjoyed the main characters and the side characters that follow.
reading this feels like having only a bite of every different fruits..only a bite .... and like playing a chess but can't never win with a huge victory. there's no plan at all.. full of carelessness just like leaving the people she cares without even security although there is but without precautions or plan B or C ... just like "i leave them to, whatever" .. and i am nearing the ending but what happened to her space ? can't it still be used by humans and beast..? The beginning chapters are encouraging but nearing the center plot, i started skipping chapter by chapter.
so in chapter book 4 chapter 33 adder copies dozens of lifedrinker arrow and just shoots it at him and the arrows start chasing him ,but if you all remember in start the lifedrinker arrow needed to be touched by the person's blood to chase after enemy, then how the fuck are these arrows chasing after cloudhawk again and again , the starting books made some sense and were nice but these later chapters has started being shit without any fucking sense , lile author just wrote the story on a whim without any logic or proper thinking.
It's already ended, even though I wanted to see Jing Chen and Li Luo's Love story and how they get married
This is the best kingdom Building on this platform ever, don't look further, you can binge read this.No goodie 2 shoes stuff, characters are not no faced and have a good range of emotions.love it
Found another sport/Football novel again, great. Read a chapter or two but I'm not really a fan of 1st person narrative so skipping this. Anyway great novel and good luck
Welp sorry if there's any mistake or bad grammer ;)
It's been almost 4 months, so I supposed it's time for me to write a review and let you all know what you're supposed to expect and not to expect in this novel.1. Is this a heavy sci-fi element? Yes, it's meant to be a heavy sci-fi element, but if you haven't seen much of it yet, then please do be patient about it. I'm writing hard to develop things slowly and not just speed run or write hastily which could ruin the storyline.2. Is the novel going to be about Mechanic? Yes, the main character, Shi Tian, also known as Nathan (alias), is a mechanic and more detailed explanation and aspect regarding the mechanic path would be explained as you gradually read more.3. World building/info dumping? Yes and no, the world is still being constructed despite having 200chs+ already. I don't like to simply write a whole chunk of text filled with the world and info dumping, but gradually revealed them bits by bits, allowing the readers to digest the information.4. Action-packed? Definitely, what kind of sci-fi doesn't have action packed? Keep in mind that the action/fighting would be different than most novels, given it's a Sci-fi, so weapons are advanced and might not even exist (at least in this current era), so don't attempt to go "how is this possible" or "that's impossible" on technologies that seemed far-fetched.5. Romance Element? Currently not the main focus of the novel, so don't expect to see lovely-dovey moment or cute moment. There would be interactions between the Main character and numerous female characters, but the number will be kept in a ratio similar to the Main character interaction with other male characters.6. I seemed to have read this kind of novel before... If you have this sense of deja vu, then you aren't wrong if you have read "The Legendary Mechanic" novel before. This novel is inspired from it, so there are elements that are similar, but the plotline is completely different.TLDR: Thank you for reading the novel, and I hope you enjoyed it. If you have any questions, feel free to comment below, but note, I might not give a clear answer for your questions depending on what it is.
Sigh... I don't usually post reviews, but the disappointment here was so great that I needed to do it this time.First, I must say that this novel really has a different concept, but it is exceptionally poorly developed. In the first six chapters, you will notice how repetitive the writing of the text is, which gets irritating very quickly.But that's not by far the worst problem. Worst of all are the ways the characters act, think. It just doesn't make any sense. In fact, here I had the opportunity to read the most absurd things I've ever seen!For example, the elders of the MC's family acts in a highly childish, naive, and stupid way.An elder simply decides that taking the greatest genius in the family for a casual trip is considered OK when that genius has only a few days since birth. The family ancestor, someone who should be experienced enough to be careful, simply tells the truth about his family's genius to a bunch of strangers.I mean, seriously? Such a thing should be the family's biggest secret. They should protect it even from the family members themselves to prevent leaks.However, they act as if there are no attempts to assassinate geniuses in this world, as if it were a peaceful place where a genius can peacefully grow...And obviously, this world is not like that, as no author would miss the opportunity to write dozens of chapters on assassination attempts, revenge, etc.And if you're not convinced, there's still a character who simply falls in love with a newborn... Again, really? Is this really something that makes any sense to anyone?Anyway, that's what I saw in this novel, and I'm sincerely disappointed. I thought this would be a good read, but I will have to stop there, as I can't enjoy reading a text with these problems.But if you think these things are acceptable, or you can turn your brain off while reading, then maybe this is your cup of tea...
I tried to stick to the story and read more as it might become better, but i couldn’t .I don’t know why the trend today is to have unreasonable, merciless and Lustfull as a protagonist, withought any reason for his character to be like that.This story is a mediocre pornography to say the most.But certainly is not an artistic story that i enjoy.
i thought fan-fic is hard to get through webnovel's system, because of copyright issues, i think this is the first one that should be a fan fic in here(released by webnovel), just based on similarities on OPM, like the training and balding stuff.Idk what to expect, but we'll see if this can really reach trial read or the Editor's not paying attention.
Since my previous review was deleted and I woke up like 5 minutes ago I will keep this short and simple. Characters: Entertaining and fleshed out. Chapter length: Just right. Story progression: A bit slow but completely fine. Thank you for letting me know that my previous review got deleted author sama. I highly recommend to new readers.