The story is really good. The characters name are lit and I recommend this novel to everyone.
I don’t read novels much, but yeah this one looks promising. I think I found a gem hehe. We need more chapters.Keep it up!??.............................
I originally really like the Story and lowkey mcs and so i read the mtls up to chapter 80 and the i dropped the novelThe novel Was fine and although not without flaws( a bit repetitive, slow story development) it Was still a fun slice of Life lowkey MC read until the Worst Flaw that DESTROYED the Novel ... Nationalism The Story develops more and more in the Direction -China is the Greatest and Number 1-America are all Evil Barbarians-China Should Dominate the World because China is Number 1.another fun story ruined by Nationalism, dont bother reading it, it just gets worse
my problem with this series is and I hope u can relate "the strongest guy is Chinese, the second strongest guy is western and the only reason he earned that spot is because he is half Chinese , china is the strongest country , Chinese jets are the fastest, Chinese have the only prehistoric gravity machine that not even the americans can replicate and its made out of an alloy that no one can put a dent into but ofcource except our number 1 hong u know the Chinese dude who looks like he is 20 but speaks in cold voice but he smiles and loughs because called voice makes 4 a perfect cool Chinese dude ya and everyone needs to learn Chinese now if not they excute u so u get my point
All good and amazing at mortal world arc but all thing got hectic once MC went to immortal civilization. The story got more incoherent with previous chapters. This kept happening for hundreds of chapters. No explaining on how and what got him on some situation that you have to backtrack some chapters still confusing how they connects to ongoing storyline. Its still worth reading mortal world arc for those who are interested if they have no other novel to read they find interesting
I must say that I have been searching for a good novel combining the Modern Day world with Cultivation, they are rare and most that I found are sub par, but this one, well it's good.PROs:- A badass MC(I had enough of MC's that are cringe and unlikable or having to wait for character development, I prefer to hear the MC's story piece by piece) Check, - Cultivation in a modern world Check, - Harem that for many will be a turnoff, but I am fine with or without so Check- Good grammar, I don't have to stop to reread to understand what happens, with mistakes like a character's name in another place, that have no effect on the overall novel.CONs:- The world building can be worked on, until now we don't know too much about the overall world also how chi made it's way in the world or if was there since the immemorial.- For people that don't like Harems, I don't think it's for you, even if it's well done.Overall: A good read.
you should read 5 chapters and tell me how many brain cells yall lost as well. Iost so many brain cells that i could barely register simple words. So many useless information were presented so many useless opinions were presented. So many useless things were presented.
Please try and pay attention to the tense of the words you use, some of your sentences are incomplete or too short. As well as some words are misspelled, but overall still understandable and thankfully your pronouns are good.When did and why does Shiyuki have a crystal heart? I thought Shiroe was the only one to have one, because it was an experiment from that 'woman' that their grandmother gave permission for her to experiment with Shido?Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!!!View More
I am at chapter count 505 and now I'm dropping this novel into the gutter.This story was good at the start. Fishing, from under the nose of op characters, cultivating with most unique and original methods, eating legendary food which even MC didn't know will fish again or not. Making people drool and let readers imagination run wild. But later on it became sh'it. MC going around killing people, becoming conceited and biased (which happens with 70% of all the novels in asian world:- China berating Japanese, Japanese berating Chinese and korean berating both). And MC dies, looses his cultivation, possesses dying old man's body (having lots of children's and grand children) MC is still virgin btw, and start over.Cultivation in this novel sucks. Writer wasn't able to bring out the essence of cultivation.
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ACCORDING TO THE LATEST MTL.CHINA IS NUMBA WAN.CHINA IS BENEVOLENT.CHINA IS THE RULER OF EXISTENCE.ALL COUNTRIES AROUND THE WORLD SHALL RESPECT CHINA AND BE ITS CUTE LITTLE PET OR THEY'LL BE ERASED.THE MC IS LOW/HIGH KEY DOG OF CHINA.
good novel dont know why i have to put 140 characters but hereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo