overall this story so far is great, really disappointed that it hasn't been updated in 5 months tho
So far I like it, but like many of those New novels the update of chapters is a little slow. But it have a good backgroud, and the MC is op but not too much
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This book is very interesting, I won't lie. I'm not a big fan of reading but Clinton Gene has me booked! I can't wait to read his other books. This author is so underrated. The public needs to discover his work as well.
All i have to say is that even though the story has slow development, its has great potential. plus we need more scifi on webnovel. i really hope this one gets chosen!!!
This is one of the best masterpieces I have read until now. The story is slow-paced but that's the most interesting part of the story as it gives enough depth to the characters and world development.I'm afraid that most of the audience on the web novel is more interested in fast-paced stories with cheat abilities. I hope people will give this novel a chance as it will not disappoint.
I shall be a shameless Arthur because you should read it and the story will be for the future so if he gets something in chapter 2 that means he could use it in chapter 60 it does not have to be used right away.
I like the way the story has developed even after reading for a klong time. The writer's point of view is interesting .While the writing quality is a bit down since there are a lot of grammar errors, but overall this is a story which is worth reading
I have read the novel Frist 20 chapters and it was really interesting and great to read . even better than the description ❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️ It is both funny and amazing novel. Hope the author will continue like that ?
Review after the 45 free chapters - I am confused on how much I should tate this novel. While I found many parts of the novel cringeworthy, like mc being a simp in beginning, or every person in the city being stupid, just trying to humiliate mc and his wife, and mc getting massive powerups from the system within just days, these all things make the story cringey. Still there are some things I like in the novel, like the pacing is good, and writing quality of author is good, that he made me look forward to even such cringey story. Also, the romance is good, the heroines are not the conventional female archetypes, which I like. My only suggestion is - improve the pacing of story even more by making non necessary fights even shorter, like the fight with goblins.
Found this by coincidence while author recommended reading my story.The story itself is not like the usual, what's more interesting for me is how the author portrayed time with the flow of the plot. CREATIVITY LEVEL is great , minimal grammar lapses and good choice word construction.Cool that author has already planned a couple of chaps. Looking forward to this. Keeping this to my library. :)
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