UIGUN
I would say that I really like this novel, but I cannot do it for one reason, namely 18+ scenes, or, to be more precise, the lack of such in MC, it's just terribly uncomfortable for me to read the moments in which the MC observes other characters doing ***. Someone can say that MC is simply not interested in ***, but why then does the author poke these moments in our faces so clearly? The most unpleasant thing is that the author not only mentions the *** scenes, but partially details them, which makes these moments even more unreadable. And here you cannot use the excuse that this is only the beginning of the novel, since I am writing this comment at the time of the release of Chapter 75.Initially, I started reading this novel because of the harem and 18+ tags, but so far I have not seen any correspondence to these tags in this novel, except perhaps ntr.This novel has pretty good grammar and interesting character development, but I can't give 5 stars due to the above listed shortcomings.
The Story seems promising hope the author sticks to it looking forward to see how it develops ?
the idea behind the story is okay. The way the story is told and presented to the reader is one of the worst I have seen in a long while. Plot armor so thick that it hides world building full of holes and inconsistencies, don't worry it maybe takes a couple of chapters to fully see how thick the plot armor is but once you do the broken world building is very obvious. The opponents are idiots and the main character is not much smarter. Everything that was put in to make the main character look cool feels so fake that the main character and his actions become a joke that is not funny
Mediocre novel.It's better to create average potential ability, rather than op potential ability that being used like sh*t. It's really frustrating to read. And finally the MC, he is a passive doll that couldn't think on his own. There's no urgency, no initiative, even in front of obvious information, he needs other to remind him what need to do. So frustrating.I am barely able to force my self to read about 180 chaps before finally give up.
will damage your brain cell one word irritating!!!
Thanks for this lovely read. When is the next update? Highly recommended..this book is unique and nicely done. Kudos to the author. Love it.... chapter wasnt expensive either. love it.
Such an amazing story. keep it up writer. you're doing a great job ......
Amazing novel, it’s like being transported to a different world. Definitely worth the time and coins
I love this book, I have literally just read it for days on end and ignored everything I’ve needed to do, it’s a awesome book
missing my daily updates:(
I want her to be with jin
“Happy dance” sooooo good and it is just the beginning, thanks Cass!!
