I understand the need to have struggles for the mc but making him fail his cleaving his meridians after making one way for him to do it is crazy! Author makes mc struggle to much just to get one powerup. It makes you think that no matter what happens in the story with his talent he’l always be beneath what he should already beOther than the part about the mc having to struggle with every breath and no break the novel is fine. World building is great!
Writing quality is pretty good. The story is set well with good world background, and the charactar is introduced really well. This is a pretty good read and a well needed twist on gates and dungeons, if you will. It finally changes the trope on what they are
I'll likely end up being quite shameless. Despite a slight improvement, I should nevertheless point out that my writing is far from faultless. I've been working to make the book better, especially this one while keeping the book's "multiverse" theme going. While maintaining some of the details and characters from the original GINKEN, this is thought of as a separate work.The way the original plot developed wasn't to my liking, and the books I was making in the background were taking up unnecessary room in the library. To fix that, I've made a new account, which is the one you're currently viewing.Anyway, I look forward to reading all of your comments and I hope this book finds a home.Many thanks to all who support it!
Great novel with great potential. Keep it up
Man really ?
Instead of amazing stories like Heretic apothecary genius or Notebook of fortune, we get this ?
Maybe I am being unfair , but still.....
The story has a good path thats has many optional path it could go! Seems like MC going to be doing some early gains in his child hood and I wish to see his age progression gradually over chapters onward... but to many reader that would get tedious for them so if Author could do 1-1# to the beginning! Some highlight reel of family moments and parental shenanigans!
EU NÃO ENTENDI FOI PORRA NENHUMA PELO AMOR DE DEUS NUNCA É SÉRIO NUNCA LI UMA NOVEL TÃO CONFUSA NADA FAZ SENTIDO O CARA DIZ QUE ESTAVA SENDO VIGIADO E PODERIA SER MORTO SE AGISSE DE FORMA SUSPEITA MAS ELE AGE SUSPEITO DESDE O INÍCIO MAS ELE CONTINUO VIVO! COMO ASSIM?
I read almost half of it and l enjoyed reading . Thanku so much for presenting such creation .. lt was great. I am looking forward to read more .
Cerita yang Bagus , penulisannya Lumayan , Memiliki Alur Yang Bagus , Dan Penjelasan Tentang Chakra Dan Jutsu Serta Pelatihan Tubuh Bagus , Benar² Konsep yang Bagus , Aku Harap Kedepannya Akan Ada Lagi lebih banyak Konsep dan penjelasan Jutsu Dan Pelatihan Lagi , bukan Hanya omong kosong seperti Fanfic lain oooo**
I mean, a very small minority is fine with NTR but the majority of the readers dislike NTR, I think most stuff is fine but I really dislike NTR and excessive humiliation.I truly don't like wearing a green hat or seeing anyone wear a green hat for that matter, also, seeing the MC getting humiliated left and right sort of triggers me.Great work, just the choice of tags is a bit yeah.
Did I ever review this before? Nah, I'll just review it again...It's about isekai(Another isekai to xianxia world, URGH!!) guy that have roulette draw as his cheat.I had finish reading this, and I can say that it's one of those shameless xianxia world. I don't mean the mc, but the other young master and old master and some ancestor itself.. Everyone with higher cultivation just attack mc without care and thought its justified to attack him just because he's a genius...
MC is actually kind of smart. dneiwjdkdkdkekkekdkskskskzzkkzskskkdkldlzkkdkdkddkkkxkkddjjdjdjdjkkdkddkikidkdkdkkdkdkdkdkkdkdkdkdkkdkdkddkdddd